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lol this is good. i enjoy this i dare say almost as much as 'to dance in shadow'
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- YAY!
4289268 i would like, no I DEMAND more. dont think i dont see that 'incomplete' in the description! the show must go on!
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I chose Berry Punch as my Numbskull!
So she will be added to the Point of View story.
I love it! This got me chuckling in a way few stories ever have!
Orc loves elf. Film at eleven.
A most enjoyable ethnosocial Rashomon thus far. And it stars best pony, which is always a bonus. Part of me thinks that the tribes should be better integrated after so many centuries living with one another, but the rest is having too much fun to care. I eagerly look forward to more.
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I was wondering how you'd work in the third Hearth's Warming Eve quote. It'll definitely be interesting to see the earth pony perspective on this mess.
I would really like it if Derpy try as hard as possible to make him understand her feelings and him playing the one whos hard to get, but giving her a chance eventually.
I hope this get not to fast in the lovemaking direction, i just want to get a few more cute scenes with Derpy, i would even like her to be a bit shy later if they should really having a date or something like that.
And here i want to thank you for another good looking Derpy fanfic
PS: Lately i enjoyed some conflicts and a somehow Derpy is cute if she is sad sometimes and even more cute if she´s feeling better after that if she get a good message or something like that.
I was pretty interested in you're creation of pony sociology and defining the differences between unicorns and pegasi. It also helps you're using everyone's favorite background pony, Derpy!
It was cool just reading how Derpy is trying to show effection for Bucky but a cultural barrier that she just doesn't understand because it's not common knowledge to her is getting in the way and that you mention she basically raised her daughters (always love fics that make both Dinky and Sparkler as her daughters) as pegasi and as a result they don't seem to get along with their fellow unicorns. It's a small detail, but really intrigued me and I always love stuff that like that helps broaden the world.
Really looking forward to the next chapter.
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More fun tidbits.
As mentioned, I also plan to have Berry Punch in the story, as well as Piña Colada, her little sister.
I am planning on the slightly more innocent and slightly less socially conditioned foals to also have a point of view of various events.
And, I plan to have Bucky teach Sparkler more about being a unicorn while Sparkler teaches Bucky about being a pegasus. Read at yer own risk!
This story will also deal with various mating practices of ponies... Not in just a sexual sense, but in the cultural sense. There will be some frank moments where different species try and figure out just what in the hell is going on.
Edit. I really screwed up this post. Now corrected. Sodding hell.
'was' a lucky stallion, perhaps?
Well, this is certainly different courting styles. I may have to steal them.
I usually don't like comedy around here as it is often times made to be unrealistically ridiculous, but you've managed to make a scenario funny and believable... I will give it a thumbs-up.
The picture caught my attention. The premise caught my curiosity. The first chapter caught my interest.
Well played sir.
This is to cute
Browsing the expansive bookshelf (or the feature list) and came across this piece of beauty.
Derpy caught her stallion lolol good job Derpy!
Well, color me intrigued...
And thus the Unicorns are the Vulcan. Pegasi are... Illogical.
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only one problum i have so far
THIS is a Snoot
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THIS is a Snout
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Know the difference it could save your life
I'm sure someone's probably asked this, but I'm going to as well.
If Pegasi are brutes and Unicorns are snobs, does that make Alicorns brutish snobs?
4363842 Snoot is a cuter sounding word. Shush.
congrats you have achieved an instafave! my highest regards and with nearly 50 chapters still yet to read i got a long night(s) ahead thank you for a delightful story from the get go!
4289268 If the unicorns are the snobs and pegasi are the brutes, where does that leave the poor Earth ponies?
4468857 numbskulls
4488310 Aren't snips and snails unicorns? I thought they had the corner on being numbskulls...
4353585 Captain, that's a
n earth ponyKlingon, not a Vulcan.4397467
also, i feel like 1-upping you a little bit so...
The way you portray the Pegasi social system is very interesting. even though its not actually "Cannon correct" I really enjoyed it. Lol and you totally too lines from the canterlot play episode
Yeah, I’mma gonna call bullshit right here.
1. Were the genders reversed I seriously doubt you’d be playing this for laughs. (Not that you’re doing a stellar job of that, either. )
2. This sort of scenario, if played out often enough, would have to had ended violently at least once since the tribal unification. Only one such SNAFU involving a noble (or one of their particularly valued serfs) need happen to cause a diplomatic incident severe enough for this asinine custom to die the ignoble death it deserves.
3. I expected Looney Tunes‐esque antics, where it was a single misguided pegasus vs. an unwilling paramour, the town mostly blissfully unaware or incapable of intervening due to the ridiculousness of the situation as we get a drawn‐out Benny Hill style chase. Instead I get pegasi cheering on what Bucky can only assume is imminent rape, without a single earth pony or unicorn deciding to step in to clear matters up. I mean, seriously, Roseluck had to know what he was thinking and her only comment was “Buy some roses for your love?” as if the unicorn running for his life knew or had the slightest fucking clue about what the hell was going on‽
I haven’t down‐voted you yet, but I’m sorely tempted. The next chapter or so had better have him calling her (and possibly Ponyville at large) out on this, instead of just brushing it all off like it was just a misunderstanding or you’ll get that down‐vote and have damn well earnt it.
Nice story so far.
I did an audio reading of the first chapter.
Maybe I should have asked permission first?
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12584421/MiscVids/The%20Chase%20Chapter%201.mp3
I need a better microphone...
Yeah, I'm going to avoid reading this, I don't want to have another: "Diaries of a Madman" sickness again.
I'm getting that horrible feeling in my stomach again, why do most sexual stories on this site portray the mares as rapists? It's getting more drawl than disturbing to me anymore. This site is slowly starting to drain me of spirit, and to just accept people will easily like crud like this.
I'm sure allot of work was put into such a great concept (sarcasm implied)!
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(Either that or the author will delete my comment)
OKAY! those are a lot of chapters!
Its both a good thing and frightening thing yay! damn! yay! fav and thumbs up
Do I has to reads the catch first ?
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The author had their finger over the delete button but stopped because deleting a comment out of the fact of them saying it is silly
Not saying it isn't going to happen
4960906 To be fair, everyone in diaries is a rapist. The story's not too bad if you just skip the sex and assume it's rape....
OK yeah, that's not really a good thing, nevermind.
Well, I have been proven wrong...AGAIN!
I originally dismissed this story, might have been do to the tags or something, but with a little prompting from the author( I absolutely love his Luna's Suicide Solutions story) I finally decided to at least read the first chapter. Well, I did. It was good. Looks like I have a new top favorite. Now just need to find time to read it in between all my college classes at PSU
I've got a new story to read! And am I the only one who would just let Derpy take me away somewhere? Seriously, I'd love her till the day the Earth burned.
THERE'S FREAKING 227 CHAPTERS!?! WTF :-|
wait... Wait... WAIT. Wouldn't it be; He wouldn't let her? You also have an extra fullstop at the end of this.
If this is Unicorn and Pegasi psychology, I wonder about Earth Ponies. Mud baths? Onwards to find out... in over 200 chapter. Crap.
4996932 nope!
ROFL! How did it take me this long to check out this story? I'm interested to see how exactly you handled the eclectic selection of tags you've put on the Chase. Also, about 1 million words? Challenge accepted.
I've been hearing very different opinions about this, so I think it's time to make my own.
Interesting first chapter, to be sure. Pretty good start, but there's a lot of world-building that's just kind of... presented. It's a bit distracting.
[POTENTIAL MINOR SPOILERS FOR THOSE WHO HAVE JUST STARTED READING]
I've come back to the beginning, just to see how much had changed… and by God, things have changed. Your character development has gone so far for this story, it's hard to believe. Kudos, Kudzu, I tip my hat to ye.
An incomplete story with 1,310,831 words, huh? At my approximate average reading speed of 300 words per minute, it'll take me... oh, a little less than four days of nonstop reading to get through the end of chapter 508.
Well, I guess I'm not getting anywhere sitting here writing unrelated comments! I'd better start reading. . . . "Bucky Bitters ran for his life, pursued by the stuff of nightmares".
5741002 You've got the right idea! I will follow your bold example!
reading this fic through start to finish for the THIRD time, tis fuuuun.
5908230 how can you read start to finish when it's not finished ?
! You must have traveled to the future!!!!!!!!!
5916621 I'M GONNA READ IT IN ONE GO!
*Half a year later, after the Zombie Apocalypse*
Huh? Why does it say it hasn't been updated in 3 months?