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xoid


Cantankerous pedant.

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Thank you for the Fave on The Queen Dress. Queen Rarity appreciates the adoration of all her subjects. :raritywink:

Thank you for adding Fallout Equestria: Space Captain Andromeda to your library

We'll try not to disappoint :rainbowdetermined2:

Thanks for the follow. :)

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Yeah, I can understand that. The problem is that I've been largely writing without anyone available to proofread or edit for me. Even right now I'm cringing at the thought of you going through Merchants. :pinkiecrazy: That was my first story, and it really looks the part. I write all my stories with the idea in mind that they won't be perfect because I'm not a professional writer, nor do I have much, if any help on them. So I'm sorry if things aren't as well put together as they should be, but I hope you can look past the errors in favor of the overall ideas presented in the stories!

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Am I enjoying them? Hell yes! I’ve already read the three I added and am now reading Merchants of Hope. You’re an excellent story teller and a decent writer, though I do wish you had proofread those three I already added a touch more carefully. Especially the wonderbot one; while the others had the stray error that my CDO spotted, in the wonderbot one there were a handful of errors that momentarily interrupted my flow whilst I was getting my sad on.

I do hope you enjoy the stories! :pinkiehappy:

Curiously enough I do find credence in your complaints about story length and awful humor—although I must confess I prefer bad humor and lengthier short stories—but it's your observation on Trixie's behavior I found interesting. I understand if you have a differing opinion on this matter, but Trixie in the show is very mean-spirited, and in her second appearance her actions were quite malicious. Much like Starlight's recent mind control fiasco the show does a good job sometimes of portraying grievous offenses as deserving of little more than a pat on the hoof. When I set out to write I can't stop! I wanted to tone that down, make it sillier, and also give Twilight and Trixie a real reconciliation.

It would be inappropriate of me to say one way or the other if I succeeded in these endeavors, but I will maintain that I enjoyed the set of events in my fic more than the show. That's not saying much I understand depending on who you ask, but there you have it: my defense of my awful story. ^^'

Thanks very much for the favorite on Marked, I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! :twilightsmile:

Thank you for the favorite on Together Forever! I'd appreciate it if you'd leave me a like and some feedback in the comments!

1936419 Wow, that's... wow. Thank you. I think this gif will adequately sum up my reaction to this compliment.
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No, thank you for writing it! It’s rare to see robots handled so well. You’ve done a far better job than Star Trek ever did.

Thanks for adding "The Iron Horse" to your list of favorites! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story! :twilightsmile:

Thanks for the watch, I hope I continue to entertain you.

Oh and by the way, I love the icon of Kezef the Chaos Hound.

Thanks for the fave on The Quest! :twilightsmile:

1641346 'Marathoned the entierty ofthe first one'? Wow! Thanks, buddy, I mean that! I'm kinda stunned to realize that something I wrote came off as that good to a reader.

And I hope you enjoy the second story as you get the chance to read it.

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I actually marathon’d the entirety of the first one. I’ve put the second on the backburner for now, mainly because of fatigue but partially because I’d rather have a chance to savour this one.

Thank you so very much for the faves and comments. I'm flattered that you enjoyed my writing that much!

Thanks for the fave on The Chicken Book.

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Heh! I get confused about who's Faved what and the like. It gets hard to remember.:twilightsheepish:

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Wow, this is awkward. :fluttershyouch: I actually already had fav’d it, I was just moving it to my comedy shelf. Sorry for making you think you got a new fan. (I spent a bit of time reorganising my favourites last night, about 80 were moved to appropriate shelves while I think I added about thirty of my favourites to other shelves. i.e., They’re now in multiple shelves.) For what it’s worth it, if I were to make an “extended favourites” shelf it’d appear there. :twilightsheepish:

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