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metroid_freak


Proud citizen of the Upper Echelon of Mediocrity!

Nov
14th
2017

He's back! (Also, Ask Me Anything) · 3:20am Nov 14th, 2017

Well folks, I did it. I decided what my future will hold and honestly, it was the best decision I've made in a long time. I'm finally at peace with where I am, what I'm doing, and where I want my stories to go. It look a long time and I had to deal with some serious BS but it was worth it to finally have a sense of direction.

I know I don't possess the biggest fanbase but man, am I ever grateful for the one I have. You guys have been awesome.

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Arby be the best Wort Wort Wort

2583872
You need to study up on basic grammar, spelling, and punctuation. For example, sentences are typically ended with a period, and I'm pretty sure you meant to ask "What did I do wrong?". Your chapters are also way too short and your plot is overused and predictable. The writing guide is a good start; I suggest you use it.

What did I do Wong

2565499
That's a shame, because I like the cold.

2565495
If it helps, it's been -25 degrees and colder here in my part of Canada for the last three weeks.

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