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If I may ask, what is so awful about it?
She looks so happy!
New happy Derpy image yay!
Cadance, you are a devious mare. I like you.
Kudzu, this was well worth the wait. I am squeeing and losing my shit over here, for I am ridiculously happy after reading this chapter.
ONWARD TO THE WEDDING NIGHT! SEXYTIMES AWAIT!
Everybody is worried about Bucky but I think Derpy and Berry are about to have their minds blown.
Poor Bucky!
...Poor Shiny!
Edit: I like the new cover. That's definitely Derpy's O-face.
Or maybe her °_o face.
The chapter wasn't bad at all. The wedding felt a little rushed. I don't mean anything, I enjoyed the chapter, but the wedding itself felt rushed. Celestia having 'the talk' with Bucky was a nice touch. It was a good read,but not my favorite chapter of the story so far. That award goes to three different chapters. Chapter Ten aka birthday Chapter, Chapter 28 aka Want it Need it Chapter, Chapter 39 aka Declaration of War chapter those are the three chapters that top as my favorite chapters.
That said, I'm glad to see that Bucky is moving out of his comfort zone, but I'm seriously waiting to see something happen that will take a serious effort of will on his part, along with Berry and Derpy, to control it, because let's be honest. If magic really is as powerful as it has been described, and connected to emotional states as well, then eventually there's going to be a moment when the ancient walls he had built to keep it contained come crashing down. When that happens it will be up to the new walls to withstand the torrent set against them.
To Quote a favorite character from Hellblazer aka John Constantine: "So. Magic. What's it all about, then? I wonder what you were after when you go into the game. It's usually something. Something specific that you think is worth taking risks for. Money. Sex. Revenge. Power. Enlightenment. Thinner thighs in thirty days. It's a long time ago for most of you, I know. Maybe you don't remember. Fuck, maybe you don't even want to. But I'll tell you something for free. At rock bottom, it's always about the same thing. It's always about entropy. The Universe is winding down. Things fall apart. The moving finger writes, and what it writes is "Tough shit." You can't get something for nothing. Like God said to Adam when he kicked him out of the garden, "Now you've got to work for a living." If there ever was a free lunch, it ended right there. So we push and we pull and we sweat. Putting in a shit-load of energy to get a little back. Third Law of Thermodynamics, right? The one we all love to hate. Cheers. But with magic, it's different. Or it could be. Case in point -- this fine old plonk. How did it get here? Grapes had to ripen. Peasants had to toil. Some plucky kid in Marks and Sparks had to zip a long the aisles with his pricing gun. Lots of effort. Lots of energy. And once it's gone, it's gone. When things fall apart -- they do not put themselves back together again. But if you ask a demon to bring you some wine -- or jiffy some up with a spell -- well, you're cheating the taxman, aren't you? It comes for free. No grapes. No peasants. No entropy. So here we all are, then. Chasing the earthly paradise. Trying to sneak back into Eden through the back door, because work is for mug punters. You stupid arrogant little shits. We're not playing fire, -- here we're playing with napalm. There's a war on and we're whoring with the enemy for pennies. Innocent people die when we fuck up. And we fuck up all the time. Oh, don't get me wrong. Eden's a nice place. I was there a few months back. Left a piece of myself buried in the ground there, for reasons I won't go into. So I can tell you, God hates our kind most especially. The cheats. The hellblazers. The collaborators. Look -- this is what Heaven has to say to the likes of us."
That one part, "We're not playing with fire, -- here we're playing with napalm," That says it all. Magic, in all of its uses, abilities, and greatness always has a price. I'm not sure what the price has been in Equestria. Maybe there isn't much of one since the air is thick with magic, but it doesn't change the simple fact that the new walls are going to be tested. They have to be tested. They have to test the center.
for if things fall apart, the centre cannot hold....
(Yes it's from a poem, yes I've read a poem, try not to faint.)
For those interested in reading said poem... The second Coming
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Bucky is going to discover he is a badly wired type four on the Shetland Isles.
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Funny actually. All of those were chapters that cost me readers. Some folk were so pissed at those chapters. I dunno what went wrong.
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To be honest i'm not sure why they cost you readers. The first thing anypony should do when reading a bit of fan fiction is realize that A) this is not Equestria Prime. This is a self contained universe in and of itself. Thus, any action done by the characters within are normal for those characters contained in that universe. (Basically it's the reason why Cadence can be a bitch, Twilight can be... well, check out Hotdiggitydemon's version and you'll see what I mean. Magic.mov. and B) We are simply readers, observers of this world. Much like the watchers in Marvel. Our duty is not to interfere, but allow the natural course of the universe continue.
We may remark, become uneased at what we've seen, but regardless it is our duty to observe only.
At least that's my thoughts on the matter.
Its going to be one crazy night
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damn it, Cadance! Love and lust are not the same! XD
Entertaining chapter, though.
4422888 after so much time we got used to "sweet and loving Derpy"
To just turn into "Waaldjkaj I'M DERPY BITCHES!!!"
Doesn't really work
How are you going to to the part with the sexy times, a seperate story so the tag doesn't change, doing it in a way so it doesn't change? I am confoose.
That ewe pun packed a Berry powerful Punch
4423128 You can't please everyone, no matter what one can say about those chapters, they had spunk, you were not afraid to pull punches in them and still kept it in tune with the story, folks rage quitting after not getting things their way without waiting to see what happens are not really the readers you want.
Ooh boy...I hope Bucky ate his Wheaties...and maybe a protein shake!
Think that works better as
and had I the power,
Damn, Cadence! You do realise what you've just done, right?
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BEST!
QUOTE!
EVER!
4423681 that was a Berry Bad pun
4423530 thank you, someone put it into words.
I was just thinking and I realized something. When Dinky's real father hears about her being a really powerful mage, wouldn't it make sense for him to try to gain custody? Obviously he shouldn', but going on from what you said earlier about money and the unicorns having a lot of it, I wouldn't put it past him or his family to try. They could basically throw money, lawyers, an legalese at this.
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And then run into Bucky, a badly wired top tier type four with emotional instability.
I thought about it.
Dinky's father will not be appearing though. The rough drafts had him as low talent type two. I axed that subplot.
One draft did have Dinky's father as Blueblood though. They have the same hair!
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Hmm... I actually think that Blueblood but would have been wildly entertaining. But I understand what you're saying, if you have to many subplots going on at once things tend to get convoluted. And I thought Bucky was either a high tier type 3 or low 4, with Twilight being a high tier type 4. Although I may be interpreting what you said wrong.
Either way, I'm loving the story and can't wait for the next chapter.
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Bucky started off as a type three.
That changed. Permanent damage to his systems.
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Alright, you said something along those lines I just wanted to make sure. Just a question though, what would Rarity be under this system?
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-I am a three? Whaaaa? I don't want to be emotionally unstable!
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Forgive me.for reading so much into this. But if Rarity is a three, and was born and raised in ponyville, who taught her control and all that jazz? Like Bucky is doing for Dinky now.
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She never learned much control. Or much magic.
Hence, we see her engaging in overdramatic behaviour, severe neurosis, (inherent) and a whole host of behaviour issues.
The really bad thing would for her to suddenly learn a lot of magic and not have the control that goes with it.
She has the potential, just never had a chance to develop it.
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Alright, so what happened in Inspiration Manifestation makes sense then. Thanks for satisfying my curiosity.
celestia's just lucky candance didnt include her
Kudzu, in one sentence, you have masterfully summarized your entire writing style. Well done.
Unicorns, like any finicky appliance, sometimes need a good whack to get going again when they freeze up. Good to know.
And Cadance is well and truly in her element. Tonight is going to be very educational for Bucky. I just hope Sparkler is out of the house...
Looking forward to more.
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BRB, typing clop.
I think I'm in love with Cadence. It's a pity she's married.
I look forward to your future chapters, and I've loved this story from start to finish so far.
I have a question: can Cadence (and by extension the other princesses) conceive? Because, I would imagine that with her being able to trigger estrus, she and Armor would have popped one or two out by now.
Some notes!
inter-house war?
able-bodies mares?
Props to Dinky for not doing any mass-enchantments during the wedding ceremony! I'm also hoping that she doesn't come across that spell book any time soon, otherwise I could see her attaching a snoregasm enchantment to ponies' shoes.
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I remember Twilight mentioning Rarity's generosity binges during the birthday party chapter. Allusion?
In fact, now I'm wondering: When Bucky finally gets his school (in chapter 2,647), how many students will be adult unicorns?
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Maybe that's what the strategically-placed shields are for!
Cadence, you devious mare. Next chapter should be interesting.
Oh, Cadey........XD
4423213 You talk as if we are gods.
All this talk of Houses makes me think of Dune.
But is Bucky the Kwidsach Haderak or is it Twilight?
House Pickled: The spirits must flow!
Bucky: I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little death that brings total oblivion.
CADENCE NO
CADENCE YES
Ugh... twenty chapters in one day...
Can't go on... too... tired
Immediately read it in Gilbert Gottfried's voice.
4929908 Try forty seven in one day.
Brace yourselves: Sexy times are coming (that's not the only thing that's coming~!)
Loved the wedding, loved the shenanigans!
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When I saw that comment the first thing that came to mind was it being a reply to someone asking how many times a pony can breed in a single day or something like that
Thought to myself "Oh god bucky you better get your arse moving!"
Omg the end dialogue between Cadence a Celestia's! *ass falls off*..... ... .... not again...
I am once again broken. Oh you naughty Cadience.