How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Um...
I don't like this one bit. What the hell has spooked Keg Smasher? This isn't good, not good at all.
*keeps F5íng all day for a new chapter*
Yes, a new chapter !
*reads it in less then 5 minutes, enjoying it a lot*
*looks to one side*
*looks to theother side*
F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...F5...
Edit: when the chapter started i though that Rising finally had his new power, and it was making everyone around him hot. Booth literally and sexually. By the way, if i understood correctly, he went to show himself to other mares ? Either joking or trying to suicide in the most pleasurable way ?
the reason they are running, they arent running away. but running to
4814856 refreshing, I know that feeling all too well, kudzu's spoiling us with his constant updates.
'The peered out of a window' *Then/He ...dunno, The seems weird tho
Great chapter
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Fixed!
Earth Ponies can also channel their magic through their manes and tails.
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Pina hasn't figured this out yet.
Even neglecting vastly overpowered ideas which would damn near make earth ponies into alicorns - hoof-cast local teleportation and flying) - this could be so fun.
Not just popcorn on the roof anymore.
I just thought of something. Is there any chance Rarity is somehow Distantly related to Bucky? The similarities between her and Princess Platinum in personality are all to obvious. Unless Rarity found a book on her and her mannerisms and adopted them for herself.
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Rarity wants to be a high society Canterlot unicorn. Her bloodline is unexplored...
Keg Smasher is talking with Thistle.
Messenger burst in, "Sir, urgent message from your wife!"
"Well give it hear boy."
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...That seems like an Extremely Reasonable Assumption. Even moreso when you take in the fact he has MANY wives probably spread all around. Poor bastard is screwed; literally.
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Yep first thought that popped into my head as I read that. Death by Snu snu indeed.
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Just imagined the scene whit Twilight being chased from ticket master, but as Rising Star and the single mares from the island.
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snu snuhugs:9Should be 'at least'. But otherwise I see nothing wrong. Beautifully written as per usual.
Couple of things,
“And reading about how to focus will has me wondering if I can make my earth pony senses do stuff,” Piña explained.'
Something about this sentence seems off.
There is a missing letter 'a' in the following sentence,
'There was *a* small private cabin for the adults, and several smaller cubbies for the foals.'
That word. I do not believe it means what you think it means...
"A witty remark, gag, one-liner or other witticism."
5088698 no wheatberry was trying to be funny she was saying it in response to bucky's question a foal happened to thistle
I spy with my little eye! Something that starts on T...
Typo, should've been Berry.
2 predictions:
Piña is gonna revolutionize/jump start earth pony magic and get her cutie mark pertaining to it. I've noticed hints before, but this just screams it
The seaworthiness is going to be tested at some point.
I like Wheatberry, she's cute xD
eheheh, nice nice nice.
Good show!
You double spaced a period
first typo I've seen in 100 plus chapters.
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PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE? Tell me this is a thing!
4815749 Gotta love Benny Hill. I also like the one where Twi and Fluttershy are chasing Philomena.
An ancient, fossiluzed grammar error appeared!
pulled the unicorn
Just add instant "the" right here, and BLAMMO! It's fixed!