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I hope Derpy explained why she was pushing Sparkler away, otherwise there could be some tension between them.
And as much as I wasn't too fond of Berry joining at first, I must admit it's nice to see Bucky and Derpy returning to the sweet couple that drew me into this story in the first place.
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Expect a lot of marital bonding for all three of them once at the Isles.
The train station scene is what really cemented their relationship into place, but they don't know that. Both mares understand that they were willing to send Bucky away to be with the other. There is going to be profound effects upon their relationship because of this.
4455815 Isles? They have ship to themselves! Romantic cruise!
I can't remember if I mentioned it in the comments but I happened to discuss it with another reader of the story, at first I was annoyed with Berry for moving into Derpy's territory,but I sat back to watch how Berry developed into it. I must say, I am not disappointed with what you did.
oh gawsh the little scene at the end is so adorable!
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If you read the personality profiles blog post, you will understand why Berry was needed.
There is a great personality profile compatibility chart that was posted that explains things a bit.
By themselves, Bucky's and Derpy's shortcomings might ruin their relationship. Berry is needed. All fo them have a weak point that only all three of them together can shore up.
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Thanks. Really. It was so difficult to pull this off, and you have no idea how much work went on in the background to make this happen. How much planning and development to give the trio a working group dynamic that felt realistic and plausible. For quite a while a there, I thought I was going to suffer epic fail and then crash and burn hardcore.
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We now get to see Dinky and Pina mature a bit more as characters as they move from background roles to major players.
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Oh, that reminds me...
I shipped them as a couple.
- No puns!
some people don't like ships. sometimes i agree, boats are so much better
4455866 You mean triple!
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Thank you.
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Whoops.
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Aw, thanks. That means an awful lot to me.
I've placed a lot of work into this to make it happen.
My story notes are around 30k words and grow a bit more each day.
quite
...Really? I never figured Ponyville to have more than a few hundred ponies myself.
4456163 it's really up to the viewer/writer
this guy says it's a thousand, it's a thousand
you say its a few hundred, it's a few hundred
ain't more complicated than that
Rising star is smart for just letting the girls talk so he doesn't get into trouble xD
I love those little slice'o'life chapters, not much action in them and yet, you can't get enough of them to read... I wonder if it's my deeply rooted peeping Tom speaking.
Dinky nearly broke me.....till I remembered I've written far worse.
I had to quirk an eyebrow at "the lost history of herd marriage." What, did Celestia purge the records after outlawing it, not wanting anypony to remember what had been? I'm guessing
I'm just misinterpreting the phrase. Immortal historical revisionists are a pet peeve I didn't even know I had until I started reading ponyfiction.
Aside from that, a great chapter all around. Especially Dinky, adorable little horse breeder that she is. Now to read the lost chapter. After that, looking forward to more.
actuallly according to most refences and my own guessing, I believe ponyvilles population to be between 300, and 1000
so it would be a city of hundreds.
Them berry puns
Sour Cream frosting? Isn't it Cream Cheese?
Yes, Berry, you do have the "ship" to yourselves. #Shipping
With pineapple and apple? I can't tell if that's weird wording, or if it's an Apple family recipe.
Oh god, you missed you big moment! You could have had the baked beans poisoned, Berry and rising star would collapse a b d maybe die. You could have put a whole new spin on this war...game of thrones style.
trying to sooth her and comfort her
1. Soothe.
4500851 Apparently Ponyville has a population of roughly 5,000. Don't ask me where I found that because I can't remember. But the logic behind it was sound.
No words, no words, Dinky is a smart little filly and that kinda scares me xD
How old is she anyhow? I think it was mentioned, but I probably forgot
4456054 Know I'm coming in late but this is good, seems like the calm before the storm, not knowing what's ahead yet I hope the storm holds til the political land kind I guess is coming.
I've been meaning to get back into this for a while, but one question before I start. At any time do you have a likable character arguing for monogamous marriage.
As it stood in the first arc, you have a rule which given your stated pony biology is insane; Twilight, Berry, Cadance, Luna and a few others giving passionate arguments against it, no one ever trying to defend it, and the law gets changed with no real debate or conflict.
Sort of missed the
between the adults and the foals scenes
A wild Typo has appeared!
If the manapool takes directly from the stomach, I wonder if you could sidestep being poisoned.