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Aw, wizards sniping at one another about their barred schools. I do love nerdfights. (Still, connecting every layer of a gross of shields to one another is more than ten thousand connections. That does seem rather daunting.)
I'm very concerned about the flight. This seems like the perfect opportunity to eliminate one of the few voices for sanity among the griffons, and to make it look like it's the ponies' fault. Even in the best case, the stated purpose of the tour definitely isn't going to be realized. Of course, Tannis probably intends to show them just how terrible the state of affairs is.
Looking forward to more.
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Or you mean something else entirely and I just correct it to make less sense.
5192085 agreed, this tour gives those who opose peace quite the opportunity, cant wait for the update.
You sort of accidentally a few lines or a page break just after Twilight's pee break.
they could always use fluttershy to strong arm the gryphons here, in a gentle sort of way. if mercury and poison has disrupted their minds, they will be very, very vulnerable to the Stare and the gentle suggestions of the Pegasus.
5192085 Not every layer connected but more like the shield wall the spartans use in the movie 300. Where the shield to either side and the shields behind you provide support against anything attacking from the front
Jesus, fluttershy is not going to be able to stay within griffin territory for to long. What with her deep connection with nature and the fact that the ground is all but dead at this point from heavy metals and toxins I wager that she will start to lose consciousness regularly within the second week with severe organ-failure and possible necrosis before the end of the month.
Why don't they practise combat while waiting? Or is the room too small?
If so why not practise outside? Or am I again being stupid? I blame my fever.
And yeah, this does seem like a good opportunity for poop to hit the fan...
5192129 will not be possible. Fluttershy is soon going to become severely sick due to the nature around her being as tortured as it is.
Twilight...the phrase, "English, please!" would be very useful for teaching Bucky. And it looks like Fluttershy is getting more and more sick...wouldn't be surprised if she coughs up a lung by the end of this arc.
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What? Plain speech for problem reporting. I don't see anything wrong, I see a page break followed by a jump into the action.
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The room is way too small.
And they are expected to stay in the room for their "safety" and to take advantage of their host's hospitality.
5192222 Sorry, I've realized it's just Knighty's latest changes to the mobile format, squished it all together.
Well, Rarity, the world isn't black and white, now is it?
5192175 I share your concern. I really hope she doesn't get lung cancer or mercury poisoning...
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I'm sorry mang. I wish I knew how to fix it and make it better.
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Rarity may never be white again.
5192264 I'm dicking about with the controls, seeing what I can do.
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Fixed that.
I'm confuzzled...
Why do I think this fits so well?
Someone is considerably more ill than they are letting on. Perhaps the reason Tannis' father won't use the potions from the Zebras is because they won't help him anyway.
And if the other side IS as bad as Tannis says...they would try something while Tannis is aboard Bucky's ship, diplomatic relations would take a poor turn were Tannis hurt under Bucky's care. And technically on Equestrian soil.
here is something I am having a hard time pinpointing here. at some point the gryphon had to have abandoned the whole cannibalism thing (sorry if I keep using that term but let us pretend it can be used on the level of sapient life murdering and eating sapient life), they had to in order to survive. yet at some point that tendency popped up in spades once more. likely do to their desperation and their deteriating mental health. yet at what point did this occur? was it post collapse when the ponies would not have the resources to full on retaliate? or when the pollution set in?
also I can think of a solution to the breeding problem I think, should things go fubar. magic being used to turn ponies into gryphons, perhaps primarily male ponies to female gryphons. this would allow them to vastly reduce the issues of inbreeding by putting some fresh genetic codes into the sequencing here.
I am worried as to how these gases and fumes will affect Fluttershy. Seems to me she might need something that's use to chaos to help her when she loses her mind.
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Meanwhile, Bucky is utterly immune.
5192381 I would suggest that Bucky is already crazy.
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Well, yeah, but I was talking about the toxins in the air.
Okay couple of things one Fluttershy needs a doctor that is a very concerning cough I don't think thats just the pollution. Another is I see Goshawk getting hurt in the future I know he is just doing his job but a nuzzle really they nuzzled calm down.
5192266 nooooooooo the marshmellow.
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HE?
A chaperone for a female... HE?
She... SHE! Goshawk is a she...
5192419 addendum to my Fluttershy idea she could be changing into a discordian creature which is causing her degenerating health
5192304 Remenber that all gryphons are poisoned, but the poison does not affect then the same way. While some gryphons are weakened to the point they can barely represent a risk, others still have phisical strength, but are ultermost crazy and bloody murderous, being extremaly dangerous and impossible to be reasonable.
And yes, after a necro-death spell and surviving manticore poison, it was pretty obvious pretty punny little toxins would do nothing to Bucky.
Fluttershy is ILL, badly ill, and Twilight is the next...who else gonna fall ? My bets are on Pinkie...i suspect that her prophecy surges may have something related to the toxins affecting her mind. Not that the prophecies are wrong, just that she is loosing her mind and, with that, the little control she have over the prophecies. AJ and RD are clearly resisting well, being more phisical.
5192491 Yes but the toxins described plus crippling (to the point where he cannot talk to foreign dignitaries) headaches= VERY sick.
5192498 Are you sure he cannot talk ? Maybe he don´t wan´t to talk...or he is testing their resolve uppon the peace talks. And, yes, there is always the chance he is that ill, to the point he cannot be healed. In that case, it would be lovely to have a dead king in such delicate moment.
Are those the drums of war that i´m hearing ?
5192501 My point exactly. Then the other city's leader could blame Bucky and or Twilight.
5189940 - on 'hatched a dragon from a painted rock'.
Fascinating implications.
Can ponies with special talents do things Alicorns can't? (neglecting the later wings).
Do the sisters realise they can create life from scratch, and simply don't?
Biological war just took a step up.
Deaf Parasprites that only like to eat metal-rich griffon.
Serpents with freaking electro-cannon.
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5192266 Technically, she never was. Her coat color is actually a very pale cool grey, just like Celestia is a very pale pink.
Rarity's Sclera are the only parts of her Flash puppet that are actually RGB "ffffffff".
Im worried about FlutterShy and her cough
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Are the toxins purely industrial waste and byproduct, or is there dark magic at work with the machinery and the two end up creating some sort of demonic pollution?
... img4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130214180736/villains/images/f/ff/Hexxus.jpg
"you stagger then in such a way and connect them in a manner in which each will support the others for additional strength..."
*stagger them
Extra 'in', here. I liked this chapter! Gives a bit more characterization to Flash and to Tannis. Well done!
What a wonderful line of dialogue, you don't mind if i work in something similar for my story do you? I keep seeing things in your story that i had planned for my own or had something close, i worry that if i start borrowing ides that i might be seen as a copycat. I'm thinking that i'm going to have to do a post of my inspirations and what they did for me once i start to put chapters up.
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Reminds me of a fanfiction called "The Cough".
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that is a scary one to read