How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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SLEEP IS FOR THE WEAK!!!!!
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Maybe!
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It's also for those who do not have mountain dew, D&D sessions, too much procrastinated homework, insomnia, online games, or pony stories they are hoping to be the first ones to see update so they can start a long odd conversation to help maintain their alertness through the church service they have to run the soundboard for in five hours.
1: Possibility of some Rich Ivory?
2:
3: Do you ever sleep?
Keep the prose, it is quite good.
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Of course I sleep. sometimes I just forget.
Lacto-lechery. Bucky has sure come a long way, hasn't he?
yet another enjoyable chapter.
You'll be the death of me, you know. I'm addicted to your story, and I feel i'll never catch that blasted rabbit.
I quite literally go to work just to read your story, as the parking lot is the only place I can access the interwebs.
oh and, before I forget, (and it is just a curiosity, not a complaint), why must I be graced with the image of pony puckers every time one of them is nervous? it feels like a running gag now. so many sphincters, so little time. (I'm sorry, please don't hurt me.)
5130233 Not a good habit... Trust me.
Same to you, Kudz. Asmuch as I love this story, and I mean love it, with what you've described as your ailments, you really should get some sleep. The fans can hold themselves together while you get some much needed sleep.
The first two scenes were hilarious and heartwarming.
The third scene was hilarious, akward and heartwarming.
My heart is overheating. Bucky, save me!
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I try to avoid it now. Back when I was in high school I operated on four hours of sleep everyday, and once went three days without sleeping on a whim. During the middle of the school week. In which i had to give a presentation. No one said a thing about me seeming tired.
5130260 Yeah, it's best to avoid it. I ran on an average of 1.5 hours of sleep a day while I was in the Corps, and I'm surprised that, after that little sleep and PTing myself half to death for an hour at 0530, I didn't fall off the v'hic's I worked on from exhaustion...
That aside...
Get him those pin-ups.
Right.
Meow.
Last chapter and this were very nice, sometimes I think you chop too much dialog. A lot of conversations sometimes feel rushed or ADD, but this chapter felt more natural. BTW, I Really want to slap Rarity. Stupid stuck up stuffy Unicorn. She's reminds me of Platnium, she needs an uncooth brute like Sombra. That would be hilarious if Coco fell for some nasty Barbarian type and Rares was forces to court him to be with the mare she loved.
I found this chapter hilarious, you can FEEL those Glares.
Bucky needs a and a and now we await the horror of.....'The Talk'
That freaking mental image of Bonnie being hoisted through the kitchen by her teats has me giggling my head off. Nice.
I'd imagine it would take sentinel a while to even look at one even if Bucky bought them. And when he did look it'd be for a split second before he'd be too embarrassed and hide them for several days before daring to look again only for the process to repeat for a few months because he finally caved in and really looked.
...so that other lost scene you mentioned. It is not going to involve Bucky?
Hmm, is Rarity's drama antics how her neurosis manifests itself, I wonder.
Arr, Twilight be channelling her inner pirate!
Giant gourds that can be grown quickly,
...I wonder what kind of magazines they were...
Well, I'm in agreement with Bucky. Trying to keep Sentinel from looking will just make things worse. I suggest this for starters.
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breathe
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Indeed. He has yet to learn the fine art of subtlety though.
No time to comment, life's been mean, slice of life chapters are important, character development, keeps comedy tag. This is funny.
Have a gud day.
Empty nest syndrome, here we come...
I imagined Bucky making this face as he said
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Gourds. I see Twilight is channeling her inner fairy godmother.
And Rarity is getting more exaggerated with her inability to listen. So focused on her own issues.
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It's showing, not telling. Rarity is distracted and very neurotic right now. She's, uh, having some emotional issues, that's it.
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Also, gourds. This plan was hatched a while ago, with Dashie flying off to the Shetlands for seeds.
Bucky- "Heard you have been having some rather nice dreams lately. Part of every colt growing up.... What were they about?"
Sentinel "I keep dreaming I am killing diamond tiara while fucking her......"
there is no way bucky is gonna be ready for that sentence.
Rarity needs a shagging in the worst way.
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Bibbidi bobbidi rainboom?
5130582 Considering Bucky is heavily shifted into a predatory equine now, who's to say he hasn't had similar dreams?
He already knows and accepts Thistle dreaming about nibbling on him and taking pieces off, after all.
I should really stop reading your stuff in class.
Really?! No "Radish's" comments? You folks should be glad that stallions finally gonna get laid; been waiting a while. I also hope Diamond Tiara gets a loving mother as well, she deserves it.
i just had the same spit take moment.
“Maybe when I take Coco to the spa later I can get her to talk about how handsome he is for like an hour or so and maybe then it will be out of her system and no longer a concern, so we can move on to more important things.”
"like an hour or so"
For some reason, I don't see Rarity using that phraising.
I had a silly job as a teachers' aid. She bought a service bell, like one you'd see at small shops to get workers' attention to the front desk, and when students did power points in front of the class, I rang that bell every time someone would miss-use 'like'.
I had power; the power of comedic relief.
also, I don't feel my use of 'like' in my earlier line as false.
I'd identify false-usage with comma's before, and after the accursed word.
"And then, like, she ran down the street, and I couldn't stop her." -as an example.
On another note, I'm starting to think tapping into deep magic makes Buckey older. That won't be a problem if Buckey becomes an alicorn...
Unless every time one uses deep magic, they lose a proportion of their life time; and ascention is only based on the remainder of one's lifespan...
Alicorn life-span, that's not a thing, is it?
Oh god, is it?
What if Buckey was the shortest-lived alicorn in existance? A depressing 20K-year lifespan D:
Or mare-milk makes you older... would explaign the diferance in youth between The Main-Land, and The Isles
*claps*
My eyebrows have ascended past the point of being raised.
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My god.
What ever happened to Silver Spoon anyway?
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I think she moved away. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Bucky is a total bro.