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AJ done fucked that sentence up, sugarcube.
Bucky:Mines Bigger.
Twilight: It's not the size that matters, It's how you use it.
Bucky:My Wives would agree with you. They've seen how well I can use my limited size.
Also, I'm rather surprised this song has only now come to me, given how the griffon cities are.
Twilight has to learn that size doesn't always matter.
Sometimes it's coordination, stamina, or even gentle touch that wins em over
huh. pinkie pie might have saved them with this little premonition. i do not the details, but they know something is wrong.
What, specifically, is the revelation? Twilight's uncontrollable divination? The fact that Bucky knows that the Fates operate out of Tradewinds? Pinkie's premonitions? Fluttershy's extreme sensitivity to the air? CHERRICHANGAS?
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Also everyone. Taking Bets. Taking all bets on how much longer it has to be before Bucky has to kill a bitch to show the griffons not to fuck with them. My Money is on Two Updates, maybe Three at the most.
5189689 ........ pinkie has premonitions, applejack and rainbow are likely some of the strongest of their respective breeds, and fluttershy can impose her will upon others.............
it seems to me that collectively the mane six, short of rarity, have attributes often seen in the alicorns and greater beings in your story.
Missing letter.
Twilight with horn envy...huh.
I REALLY love your portrait of Pinkie. Curiously it´s almost exactly the same that appears in Stardust/Mente Materia, another great story here, a X-Com crossover, where Pinkie, too, have incredible forseeing powers...even if it don´t mean she can do much with that knowledge. Kind of curse, knowing and not being able to do much.
Something very amuzing: Rarity went from being an ass (wich, surprisingly, become Applejack role now) to becoming bossy, as if her new knowledge gave her the right to scoff others. She was empowered by knowledge, now she needs to learn humble.
Fluttershy becoming increasingly ill. I´ll repeat what i said in a previous chapter: i sense that they´ll left almost harmless, but very, VERY ill, they´ll need a lot of recover.
Thanks for the update. The last days, without Chase, were bad, but Chance made it worth. A very heart warming story. Thanks you a lot.
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It is the cherrichangas, I knew it! I'll ponder them thoroughly.
"quivering" or "wavering"?
Oh dear god, does Pinkie Pie have lead poisoning already?
Sounds like my mom...
this
a party to end all partys...
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Google quavering.
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Twilight Sparkle used her magic to create Spike from nothing. She created another living breathing thinking sapient being from an egg that was supposed to be impossible to open. She was meant to fail that test.
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Ah, another synonym. I actually went to dictionary.com
5189772 normally that idea comes from spike's egg being infertile or something. thus somehow hatching a life that was nto present, yet creating it fro mthe basic components.
i fully intend to make this part of my everyday lexicon.
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They are good at passing tests meant to be failed, aren't they. Bucky by blunt force application and Twilight by sheer miraculous impossibility.
5189808 The egg wasn't even a real dragon egg. It was just prop to get students to fail.
Just like Bucky was supposed to fail his test with the glass orb when he was in school and he made a snow-globe out of it.
Chase, Chapter 161.
5189857 as quoted from lyra
BUCKY SMASH
5189875 shrugs. be honest that very much confuses me. least in the stories where the spike egg was infertile, there are components to create the dragon from.
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- Confusion!
That is the whole point mang. Twilight, the manifested embodiment of magic, the equinomorphic personification of magic, created something from nothing.
5189940 ......... well to get technically turned matter into something else.
Best line of the chapter
Can I give this story another thumbs up? ...Please?
Spike is artificial? I wonder if he finds out someday.
Well, at least now we know that Celestia doesn't filch dragon eggs.
Mr Haiku, you owe me a lung.
5189975 no no no. This is
horn envy.... It killed me
it ain't horn size twili, it how well it works.
Bucky sort of gave up on trying to get through to Twilight that Pinkie might be connected to the Fates. "Twilight. Fates." /points at Pinkie several times, makes meaningful eyebrow motion and pantomimes talking.
Seriously, at this point Bucky can just go ahead and assassinate both kings and assist in Tannis taking over so long as all griffondom is annexed to Equestria unconditionally. It's already been pointed out that they have no griffon magic-users anymore, and even if they have unicorn mercs and they don't have any Alicorn-grade power on their side, and Bucky's a nascent alicorn even without the fact he has a divine soul, being a type 4.5 or somesuch.
This would save the bulk of the griffons, bring peace, and cow those who are mad. The ones who've COMPLETELY lost it would likely throw themselves at Bucky just to be killed, thus weeding out the ones who are 100% beyond saving. Swoosh, done and over with. Kill some royals, kill some crazies, kill some loyalists, then take everyone else to Equestria and figure out how to fix them. Beat the ones who don't get fixed until they can't be a problem.
Twilight envies Bucky's big black horn...
An ambush is a sort of surprise party, Pinkie!
5190976 SUPRISE! Its your "Time to die!" party!
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that comment was a long long time ago, in a mentality far away,,,
a weird thing this story is doing is making me take into consideration ideas brought up or used in other stories. such as how people interpret the hwole spike egg thing and such.
I'm gonna say it...Spike's a familiar.
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Unicorns? Constitution?
**Snerk**
I'm sweating... I'm sweating! I think I'm sweating!
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Not exactly.
Spike is everything that Twilight Sparkle, a foal, believed a dragon should be.
He is quite literally what a child would imagine a dragon to be like. Twilight messed up though. No wings.
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In an unrelated note...
It is not the length, it is not the size, it is how many times you can make it rise.
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Somebody is getting scary good at reading between the lines and picking up on subtleties in a conversation. All of the things I want to say without actually saying them.
The Pink Prophet speaketh. Given the nonsense Bucky spouts when the Fates forbid him from saying certain things, that can't be a coincidence.
Also, signs of smog sickness already. This going to suck. And wheeze. And gasp...
And the griffons present a troubling Catch-22: They're crazy because of all of the heavy metals in the environment. If they left this land, they might be reasonable, but they need to be reasonable in order to be convinced to leave the land. Negotiations should be interesting. Those of us who have read The Catch have some insight into the ultimate outcome, but there are several ways it could still go.
Twilight's power is growing faster than her control. I just hope something catastrophic doesn't happen during the talks. That would just be embarrassing.
Looking forward to more.
Twilight really doesn't like overcompensaters. Who'd a thunk it?
Did pinkie pie just get possessed by one of those mares that visit him and help him defeat their mother god of all ponies? That'd be cool. Also, um.... what's happening with Moon bow?
5189707 One and a half. Bring it on!