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And when I began to construct her character and core personality, this is what I was going by. I hadn't seen Rainbow Rocks yet at that point, months ago. Seen it since, but I liked the core character I created. I've tweaked it a bit of course, but this is my reasoning in a nutshell, more or less.
5300696 she does have power though. with her friends harmony's magic can be tapped into, and she is now a part of it. true it is a rather different medium but it is sitll power, and a lot of it.
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Luna can english xD
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Develop diabetes?
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WHAT!!! but... but... its Nutella!!! AND PEANUT BUTTER!!!!
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Diabetes.
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HRRRRNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGgggg.............
5300680 discord and tirek fighting makes sense if discord turned on tirek early on enough.
the victory over the sirens relied on sunset shimmer's strength. strength she only found in the human world, not in equestria.
don't know all the details of what is to come but i am a bit afraid of it feeling like a rehash that leads to the strength she already had i nthe movie. she did still lack confidence in herself but she was strong. the sunset here felt too much like sunset shortly after her defeat, uncertain and lost.
............edit........ and facepalm. behaving just like i feared. this is how she would have behaved if she and celestia had met shortly after her defeat......... if this was the sunset from the movie, the mood would have been more prolonged.... and there would be so much more to say between them.
and more so, and i forgot this, there is no way she would call someone steeped in dark magic her master. to her it would be liked submitting to the demon that sat in her chest, waiting to get out.
i am not saying the set up is bad, but it feels like there should be more emotions or more uncertainty going on here. sunset unable to meet celestia's eye, and unwilling to accept her forgiveness for what she had done and etc. the broken sunset vs the one who rebuilt herself anew. the broken one would behave like this, the remade one would be stronger.
I was expecting Luna to be first. :/
so that's how the entire "minion/master" thing started...
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But in the show her power was what she drew from the bonds of friendship. Since she will need to make new friends this will apply. Since its the entire theme of the MLP universe I doubt were done rehashing it any time soon. Friendship = Magic, New World = New Friends. New Friends = New Magic.
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Thou art a liar, behold thou pants art on fire!!
5300828 or bring along the likely highly magically charged humans along so they have access to alicorn jesus should it be needed again.
also nothing could have driven sunset through that portal again faster tahn being labeled a resource.......... least the one post rainbow rocks, and it being someone else labeling her that than herself, let alone celestia.
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LOL, but.... TWO PINKIES!!!! really? it would be worse than the Leyline Nuclear meltdown!!!
5300852 they could defeat the fates themselves and miss cosmic pants in a week.
then again those five would be completely invisible to the fates to begin with. different dimension and all.
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....Hmmmmm
while I cannot dispute how powerful a POWER ROCK BALLAD would be, or how epic a rockoff with God would be... I feel the devastation it would cause would be counter productive towards not destroying the world.
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I took it that Discord and Tirek never cooperated in the Chase-Verse?
Why would Tirek have needed help, he used the situation of the collapse, he had shunned unicorns running around in fear like beheaded chickens. Easy targets.
5300916 now that i think about it they didn't. still my opint is that you need sunset to be as strong as she was in that movie. else they would have been beaten by the sirens........ even worse the sirens could hvae found their way back to equestria. just imagines how powerful they would be.......... hell, if anyhting would be bucky's weakness, it would be something that feeds upon strife.
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The biggest problem I have with the movie is that the Sirens talent and abilities are magical Music, the Elements are Magical friendship, by all logic of power the Sirens should be more powerful, but magical Friendship is shown to expand exponentially so by adding more friends the power grows.
So its not that Sunset was more powerful or had power but her power was added and multiplied to the group.
But isn't the reasons the Elements even had power was because they were borrowing it from the Tree of Harmony? The tree of harmony was created by the fates, I doubt they would be bested by the power they created and was borrowed. Harmonic forces grow with cooperation Bucky grows with Conflict. Any conflict, sure as a Nascent Alicorn his power is somewhat limited. But as a True Alicorn he would have that Bullshit power that he could never be beaten in a battle of power. Bucky isn't weak, he is restraining his power.
5301029 they did not create it more than they planted it. and more so the power is something that is beyond them as it is menat to defet a foe beyond them as well.
however the elements themselves clearly contain their own power. else there owuld be no way for the element of magic to work, seperate to the tree by a dimensional barrier, a barrier that starswhirl likely designed to prevent the worlds from coming unnaturally closer.
the tree of harmony itself has rooted itself into the leylines of the universe itself as well.
5301029 also let us not forget they were not using the elements at all. the element fo magic planted its power in five beings for an unknown reason.
besides specializtion like that is meaningless in the chase if you havent noticed.
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Tirek and Discord NEVER cooperated in The Chase verse.
Lord of Myth has no idea what he is talking about...
Sneaking quietly, Luna scanned for Sentinel's hideaway. "Oh, Senty! Where are you?"
Her voice grew closer and the young thestral began quaking in fear. His eyes as wide as saucers and his irises shrunk to pinpricks. Please don't find me; please don't find me. Her hoofsteps got closer and closer and his heart raced faster with each hoofstep.
Luna was close, she could practically taste the fear Sentinel was radiating. She allowed herself a sadistic grin as she closed on her target. She heard a quiet whimper from beneath her. She stomped her hoof and Sentinel let out a scream that would overload any creature's echolocation as he darted out of his compromised sanctuary. "You can run, but you can't hide!" She sang as she skipped his way.
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Oh, there is a lot to be said between them. You just won't be reading most of it. The next scene picks up several hours later, post conversation.
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I did what?
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That was something I pictured Luna doing.
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I know. I was attempting to be funny. Sorry. Been a long day and I am brain dead.
5300916 I kinda took Discord beating Tirek as something along the lines of him feeding Tirek magic like a zit fills with icky. Then he just poked him really hard. Or a bitchslap. Maybe a wet mackerel.
We got little detail on that little slice of things, so my brain filled in some parts.
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Good. Would be uncommon for me to misread something with best non-pony canon character.
I need to differ a little, since there are so many awesome non-pony OCs in the Chase.
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Which was my intention.
And now, the teaching of the Shimmer begins.
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It's alright, I found a more appropriate image, though.
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Yaaaaay.
Now to make a chapter of the Prank including Sunset.
5301126 i will try to give it a chance. still the starting of sunset's introduction is rather shaky. especially her reunion with celestia here. it was far to quick, sunset just throwing herself down like that. the guilt and shame should have been overwhelming for her, and she would not not know how to possibly apologize........ there is a pattern between celestia and her personal students. she ultimately becomes more mother than tutor for them, and she and sunset would have had a similar relationship.
.......still think that celestia referring to her as a resource would probably have hurt and severly so. like no longer wanting to say a word kind of hurt.
5301156 ............ okay that better not be what happened cause that makes no damn sense. discord's collective might was far smaller than the power of four alicorns, and tirek swallowed his, a large portion of equestria's magic, and those alicorns.
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But that is how both Bucky and Twilight see Sunset. She IS a resource. Which is why she is being allowed back after committing cold blooded murder and the attempted coupe.
5301191 ........... okay at what point did she kill anyone? she TRIED to kill tiwlight but the problem there is that she had no control over her own actions anymore. and i presume the coupe was also born from her losing her shit.
which was one of the factors that lead her to have a completel emotion breakdown. she lost control of herself and saw what she was inside.
during her transformation it was pretty clear that was losing control of herself. the transformation was incredibly painful and her beahviro became extremely erratic afterwards.
5301191 also
Twilight- hey sunset i need you back in equestria.
Sunset- oh, okay, lets help protect it!
Twilight- actually i am just seeing you as a resource here.
Sunset-....... We defeated demonic sea ponies together and the power of harmony went through me.........we became friends, and you want to jsut view me as a damn resource?
Pinkie pies- seriously twilight, you are kinda being a bitch here.
Twilight- i thought you were in a coma...
Pinkie pie of equestria- shrugs.
......... i do not regret that. seriously dude, how could twilight view her as a resource after all they went through? and seriously, when did sunset shimmer murder ANYONE? and sense when did complete demonic possession make the possessie responsible for their actions while totally possessed?
points at luna.
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You fail at reading. As usual.
Might want to reread the chapter and pay attention to the actual story, NOT WHAT YOU THINK IS GOING ON.
Goddamn this is frustrating. It is like talking to a wall.
5301190 You're assuming anything with Discord has to make any sense at all.
He's more scrambled than Pinkie Pie. That's the only part about him that really makes any real sense until he started being fond of Fluttershy.
5301237 ...........oooh for god's sake.......... that is just.......... eye twitches.
sunset shimmer did not end up on the other side of the mirror because she did anything to hurt celestia, pherysically at least. she was not forced through the mirror. sunset shimmer ended up on the other side of the mirror because she was looking through forbidden knowledge. the most she did was knock out two guards before grabbing stuff and throwing herself through the mirror.
the reasons why i am bringing this up is because it gives context to why becoming a demon was so traumatic. she felt entitled to power, tp proove herself to celestia. when she became an actual monster, when she tried to murder someone when she was unwilling to sustain a hostage situation because she felt it was beneath her, it was so disturbing and shocking for her to experience. she lost control because she had convinced herself she was not a monster deep down.
her attempting an uprising and killing a lot of ponies makes it that this point is null in void and it makes completely no sense why becoming a demon would have psychologically broken her down, or that she would have become remorseful. because she would not be alarmed by what she did as a demon. because she willingly and intentionally attempted it herself. more so she would have kept spike as a hostage. and ultimately dragged back into equestria and imprisoned so she could not harm anyone in the human world.
ultimately it was a tale of a jealous and hurt daughter stelaing from her sister ti impress their mother, and things falling out of the jealous one's control.
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In this story she did.
So just... stop. Please.
Are you really trying to tell me how my own story is written?
5301274 i am simply saying what you have writtne does not work. why would she seek repetence if she had already gone so far as to iwllingly, without demonic possession, murder others? why would the demonic possession have rattled her or made her lost control if she ALREADY was that evil in behavior?
this feels unnaturally clumsy to me. incredibly clumsy. normally when you have something it has layers and does create some kind of whole.
here it just seems compeltely unnecessary darkness for the sake of darkness. what could this possibly provide her? and more so it makes her beahvior during the equestria girls incident illogical if she is so willing to commit murder. why care about that bullshit and not just get a gun and shoot up the principle office and take the tiara by force? clearly she is so far into ends justifying means that it would not matter to her.
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Because, the deaths were accidental. She was staging a coupe, and she let go of a bit too much magic. It is part of why she feels guilty. She wanted power, found power, and then found she could not control it. In a panic, she fled.
Hmmm, I went more like 'ah.'
Also 'prevaricate'. First time I ever heard that word. Least I learned one thing today!
5301325 then why would she have sought it again? why would she have gone after the element of magic and tried to become an alicorn?...... which is what she was trying to do in the first place. she killed people, and it would have torn at her conscious, because she had too much power than she could control. why would she seek even more power? it may not be as blatant as i first thought but still i cannot see any prupose other than as an addon to add darkness to an alrady dark setting....... she already hsa the guilt of becoming a monster and nearly killing people. why have it she went throug the same lesson twice?
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Because. Reasons.
Which you will have to pay attention to the little details and focus if you want to know.
Lordofmyth do us all a favor........unlike the story and stop talking its obvious to everyone your not even bothering to read much pay attention to the tags it.