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Jumping right into it, I see.
Well of course he's going to be a father, as Thistle is quite clearly pregnant! I mean, who else could it be?
Ahem... CALLED IT!
Um... a whole fucking empire, how about that? So, House Avarice are in trouble.
Hmm... Bucky comes along to break the siege... only to then burn that compound down himself, with no mercy.
wow... yeah ... this one really did feel disjointed and really confusing to me ... I don't like feeling lost and confused but I know it's going to be worth it. :P I need to read it like 3 more times to try to make sense out of the whole thing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Leave it to the princess of love to drop the foal bomb shell xD
....are you working destiny or is this simply because of a lingering curse curse?
if it is destiny....... well destiny seems more used as a metaphor than anything else in mlp. considering the cutie marks appear during events and reveleations rather than just suddenly. and the Tree of Harmony seemed to create scenarios and things over there being those who are destined for it and all.
still it is interesting to know how this whole barrel of fish that is equestria has imploded. Celestia should have not trusted her sycophants so carelessly, though she had no reason to think otherwise i guess.
....... think the intentionally chaotic manner it is depicted works.
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derp
i forgot about that
A shame Twilight can't just pop over to Canterlot and fire a nice wide beam of purple death at the Avarice compound. Alas, far more pressing matters at hoof...
In any case, the revolution continues. The rot is being excised, and that's going to hurt the body, but it'll be worth it in the end. Assuming survival, of course, but given your plans for the next generation, that seems like a safe assumption to make.
Meanwhile, Bucky has a brush with Vaguelestia. Sorry, Bucky, you need to save the world at least once before Tia tells you anything directly, and even then you won't get everything.
Looking forward to more.
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Well, think about how it is when you are in a gathering of people who haven't seen one another in quite some time. Everything just goes nuts for a while.
I wanted to get the feeling of overload, where everything was coming from every possible direction. There was so much to catch up on, and so little time to do it in.
Oh my sweet mother of plot twist! Drama! So the story of the mainland unfurls, and everything is hurled at us at once at seemingly supersonic speeds! You aren't lying when you say this is intentional, I imagine the characters are sitting down, trying to process at least half the stuff given to them properly. xD
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Not quite a plot twist. Every little thing in this chapter was hinted before, some way or another. Actually, this chapter holds a lot of loosen knots, not in definitive, but it starts. The true ancestor of bucky was hinted several times, and now confirmed. The mess that Equestria became. Everything very, very smooth.
And, again, i have the same feeling from the last chapter that the dialogues are better then ever ! I´m not sure, but i think that you changed the way they work, with a less direct approach, as i already commented.
The chapter may sound confusing ´cause, so far, we got just a little bit of development and information in each chapeter and now, for the first time, we got a truck, a big one, of things happening. But, again, i don´t think it´s too much at all ´cause everything here was hinted before, one way or another.
Please, pretty please, don´t let us on hold too much, now that you shifted in 4th gear, it´s unbereable to wait !!!!!
Thanks for the incredible work !
I don't know why I'm remembering this now, but there was a discussion between you and
4672921, unless I'm mistaken, about brewing beer. I don't remember the exact wording or chapter, but something along the lines of nurturing microorganisms during fermentation.
Sounds quite a bit like what's happening with House Avarice. Clever.
Oh gosh, this one i gonna call mine !!!! I knew, i knew that Bucky had something more then just being in the right place when it cames to kill the wolves !!! And i knew that his bloodline was related to this !!!!
Oh boy, next chapter i´ll read eating popcorn, this gonna be good, oh yes !
Minds. Blown.
Anyone who was surprised by this obviously hasent been reading the story close enough, or paying attention to Derpy
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Or reading Kudzuhaiku's spoiler-laden blog posts.
4673987 true. The bloody moment I saw the word Nauseous after they woke up last chapter I thought "morning sickness"
Plus, he has actually told us several times that berry is pregnant
As soon as that voice told Bucky to attack Cadance. I thought of Sombra.
Add that to the smoking horn when he overexerts his magic, I have a feeling House Avarice is somehow related to Sombra.
Annnnnd you completely fuck our minds over with another realization... it seems that no matter what i speculate. You always find the one option no one has considered yet is totally plausible and makes more sense.
Keep this up
Lol I already knew Derpy and Berry were pregnant XD
Technically, you could say Cadence got his mares pregnant.
Technically.
Eh, he knocked up both his brides on his wedding night.
Thanks, Cadence!
I don't know why, but every time I see "Buckminster", I read it in my head as "Buckmeister". Kind of fitting, actually.
No shit princess. Isn't it obvious that Bucky is going to be a father. I mean you put everyone in friggen heat. You'd have to be flawed to not succeed in making a kid. Given they pretty much fucked for hours.
5031430 yeah, but they didn't know that did they?
Jesus. Go easy.
And, here, we, go
Pfft, I know it's unbeknownst to Derpy and Berry (and basically everyone else), but I'm pretty sure you blatantly stated that a few chapters back.
I actually already knew they were both that way :P It wasn't subtle hehehe.
Ahhh bleagh, nicely done though dude.
Awesome job!
Damn destiny shit! Someone do that to me and teeth will be knocked down throats.
Of course Luna would have marauders. :P I love it!
BANNAR TEH USURPER
I was thinking it would be in the Noble's best interests to revolt against House Avarice.
Shame that that Equestria is so fucked up now. Hopefully after all this choas and destruction there will be a time of great healing soon!!
kinda figured... you were dropping hints all over the place, with derpy having (or having something that resembles) morning sickness, something you said in an earlier chapter about life stirring inside of her, and the fact that cadence put berry and derpy in heat and they all shagged on their wedding night.
Heheh...shagged...
Definitely seeing the seeds of the weedverse.
Still enjoying myself despite the lack of polish.