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4991240
Far too horny for my preferences.
Dear celestia... Root beer....
We didn't have those in china. Once I moved to where I am now I drank nothing but root beer for a week. :3
And hey, dragons.
I should really be asleep now.
Gud night you writing machine you.
Okay, you made me ponder the crap out of this, now I can't sleep. God damnit...
I'm thinking if there is a fight coming up, who would take the bad ass's role with Bucky like that.
And yay! Bucky's recovering, bit by bit...
This looks bad... poor Bucky has all these thoughts and feelings he wants to express and just can't do it.
Is it the Griffons? Or maybe something else. My money is on it being that so called Secret Police that don't technically exist that only job is to destroy those who use dark magics, illegally modify themselves to be greater than they were, ect that were mentioned way back early in the islands arc.
So, to clarify, mentally he is fine, minus some concentrating issues. He just cant physically make the words? Or did he part way forget how to talk?
4991410
Definitely secret police
cliffhangerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I foresee Grimglammer getting injured and Furious saves
Have a Derpy
4991430
I did not notice the mention of dragons.
4991413 as someone who has had really strong painkillers, the feelin of not being able to talk properly is kinda scary. Imagine thinking of saying something but it takes your mouth awhile to pick up on what you want to coomunicate, making what you say either jumbled or really simple
4991465
Dilaudid from an IV drip will fuck your shit right up. Sounds like you've had a stroke. You can think these abso-fucking-lutely profound and brilliant thoughts after being pumped full of that stuff, but when you go to say something, you blow a raspberry or drool or just make garble.
It is absolutely infuriating being in that position.
i'm still not happy with freezerburn, should be freezeburn
4991506
SQUEE!
Somebody gets how to see the bigger picture. Wait till you hit a later chapter. You will see what has been keeping Celestia busy. Plus, she finds time to populate pony hell and run an empire.
When Bucky gets home, a much larger world is going to be revealed.
4991488 nah not a stroke, major ear surgery mixed with dyspraxia, normally i have trouble speaking while not focusing but with my balance out of whack and bad fine motor skills talking and making sense was really hard
4991543
No, I am saying it sounds like you had a stroke when you speak. Not you as a person, just an example. Sorry.
4991551 ah, misunderstanding hut yeah like you've had a stroke. It is fun though cause you are all numb and you can be easily amused when you are drugged
It says i haven't read chapters 85-86.. y'know, them ones about 100 chapters ago
It lies
ah well
TIME TO REREAD THE CHASE FOR THE 3RD TIME
4991627
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What?
4991635
The fimfiction thingymagig has unticked two chapters, due to the fact that I have been greatly insulted by said fimfiction thingymagigs use of automagic (the scientific term to describe computer things :3) I shall endevour to read the entirety of the chase again for the third time.
Kudzuhaiku,
I've been a dedicated reader of this story for a long time. Long enough that I've seen the direction you've taken, and long enough to see the living, breathing, story that's going and of course cut it apart so that I could see the inner workings. That said, I'm both glad and slightly put off by how closely related your two sister universes of To Dance in Shadow and the Chase are related.
With To Dance in Shadow you have Rookwood who could easily be Bucky in almost every single regard, but instead of stepping away from what could be he embraced it whole heartedly. Yet, he didn't become evil. Not really good, but I would say he's closest to Lawful Neutral. That said, even then he's willing to do some exceptionally horrible things, but those things are signed off by Hades, so it's still lawful, just not the lawful that abides by moral reasonings.
In The Chase you have essentially the same character in Bucky. He's a fantastic character, to say the least, but he and Rookwood are amazingly alike. Which is to be expected. In truth, I rather envision Bucky's parents to act somewhat like Rookwood's parents. Horrible examples of what parents should and could be. But I suppose Bucky would be the choice not made. Where Rookwood chose to become an immortal, and in essence to become something similar to an Alicorn, Bucky is refraining from it. I believe that Rookwood would understand, especially now, that all things that begin must end. I'm fairly certain that he would have became the Alicorn of War. Perhaps to be with Luna, perhaps because he could understand the need for it.
Two characters, so a like, and yet through a simple choice, a small happen stance things shifted and two completely different outcomes came about.
I found it interesting how you took the same archetype and made a couple of dynamic characters out of it. Now... If there was ever a crossover of sorts... Oh, the fun I'm sure that Rookwood could have with Bucky, and vice versa.
Of course... I think that Hades would tell Bucky that he'll see him soon.
Now... On with a little Literature Criticism.
The story itself has grown from initial slice of life into a far deeper tale. It has began to take shape and establish various bits of head cannon that have been noted at, but never truly established before. In fact some of the head cannon has slipped out and made its way into other stories. What I find interesting is that while there is a definitive protagonist the simplistic riggers of Good and Bad, right and wrong, holy and evil, aren't used here. Instead it's a complex set of weights and scales that constantly seem to be in flux, and it begs the question... Does the end justify the means?
Despite what has been said about Celestia, and I do agree a bit of how she has her 'hooves' full, it would appear the the chestmaster has long ago decided that the end does justify the means. I'm quite sure she isn't omniscient, but rather she has enough information to make a very educated guess how things will turn out. It seems that perhaps she does put a little too much faith in her 'poines' thinking that being basically good they will do the right things.
Such is not the world, and it is a lesson she has not learned. (If Luna becoming jealous wasn't a big enough teacher I'm not sure a little civil war will be either).
Still, that's really the question that's being presented to us isn't it? Does the end justify the means? Naturally I'll continue reading, but I feel that the end, will never, ever justify the means.
Oof....Being trapped in your own head with a body that has to relearn everything....
Me again, found one for you.
[Derpy --------- her snoot against Bucky's neck breathing in (her) scent] [his] ??
4991665 I think it´s time for me to present a formal analisys of this story.
*reads lordfrieza analisys*
Nyet, i´m just gonna lay here...in fetal position....sucking my thumb...
They could just send Ripple. Then you would have dead dragons.
4991944
Not likely. Ripple is still young. She's killed a few wolves. She's not quite all of that and a bag of chips. Yet.
Yeesh, with all this crazyness going on, Discord must be having a holiday.
4992268
No. Talons on one leg are called a set. I dunno why.
I've been reading since chapter 120 and I'm still constantly amazed at the depth of your writing and the richness of your characters. It pains ms to see Bucky have to rebuild himself time and time again, but it makes sense. Just curious, if I asked Bucky whether he regrets what he had done, and whether he would do it all over again, would he?
Oh, and this...
...priceless
The, not she
Fucking shit. The Lord's of tartarus wants his soul. The king dragons want him dead. What's next? The changelings wants his love? The griffins wants him dead to? The buffalo want to worship him? The minotaur want to swear allegiance to him?
SHIT BUCKY! YOU JUST BECAME THE HOTTEST SOUL ON THE MARKET!
I really liked the development you gave Glimglammer and Furious. It made them much more likable and I'm quite concerned with what will happen to them next. I really hope Glimglammer doesn't end up like another certain lunar Pegasus at the climax of one of your earlier works.
Keep up the good work.
Typo:
"by Lyra, and she ship began to drift "
The, not she
seems kinda fitting
I've been waiting for her to be mentioned again...
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Dragons? Bucky, you need another pegasus with you!
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I've said it before and I'll say it again, that frost phoenix should be named Anivia.
Awesome chapter! Yes... the isles arc ends... but something else begins~
nice job!
4995639 LOL, hehehe, nice nice nice.
My guess is Bucky's going to come out and fuck up some dragons.
7700654 i have a vision of him on deck, horn aglow, fire ice and death raining upon the dragons, all while screaming incoherent words and flinging drool everywhere