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YOU DARE UPDATE AS I WAS ABOUT TO GO TO BED?!
*goes on to read the fic before sleeping*
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D'aw, I made you a bedtime story.
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Surprised I've heard no response on your page.
Okay, read the chapter, so now I get the set-up.. Filthy Rich is not evil, but he is to be the antagonist of the story...
... Sounds legit.
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Response on page?
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Um, no.
He is just another player in the story.
The antagonist of the story are the various misunderstandings that take place.
Filthy Rich is just another victim of how life is.
You're featured, congrats! Not sure if this is the first time for this story or not. ^^;;
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I dunno. I just noticed it.
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All three tribes sorta agree that Filthy Rich is a pompous plot-hat.
I only clicked here to look at the Derpy pic .
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How are the bats?
Bat country... Been there.
This story is just too cute. Favourited.
Bucky likes Derpy. Derpy likes Bucky. Filthy likes Derpy. I think I see where this is going.
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Hmmm i think it was part of the advice which Celestia gave him, that he was ask her on a date right? But i thoght they had a dinner (date) already, is just wonder, that he was going to ask specifically for a date. I just think it would borther me if everyone think that i am only interested in a date rather than a friendship. Ahhh maybe it´s part of the pheromon thing i just read about. Well i am satisfied with this explanation
This Chapter saved my morning
PS: It is a bit funny, is it right if i understand that Derpy make more pheromones than normal right now and Bucky was just not familiarized with the scent?
I like this very much, and I can see that this will be a very successful and satisfying story. A bit repetitive in ALWAYS giving the wrong viewpoints of each tribe viewed by other tribes, but what's the psychology in the absence of it? Consider me a passenger in this story train.
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And Derpy hates Filthy, Filthy has money. Filthy is Bucky's employer.
Yeah, that's not gonna be pretty.
This fic is amazing to read, such a unique take on the three tribes
I love this story. It isn't filled with action, or dark undertones, or any measurable amount of violence, but it is holding my attention. This story is stupid awesome.
Nice. Meeting in the middle. Words, yes, but heartfelt words. Words as passionate as any bone-creaking hug. Also, contacts in the booze industry, which are always nice.
I really hope Filthy Rich isn't going to make Bucky stay late on Saturday. I can't help but think of the possibility, and I just know the resulting misunderstanding could stretch out for at least half a dozen chapters.
Of course, Bucky could just leave anyway, but I don't think that's particularly likely. Though the mental image of him stumbling to Dinky's party while caught in the throes of a moderate panic attack is... well, part romantic, part concerning.
In any case, looking forward to more.
Girl you go right on ahead and strut your stuff. *three snaps*
This was enjoyable. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to more. I really have nothing else to say at this point
Absolutely beautiful imagery and use of metaphors right there. My only suggestion is to use more contractions in your dialogue. It would flow better and sound way more natural. Other than that, onwards we go!
I thought that this story was going to tell only about Derpy (y u no use Ditzy!?) chasing that poor fella around the town.
I was positively surprised. This story is something beautiful.
At first I thought I was reading a cute romance between Derpy and an OC...
Then I thought I was reading a sociology paper...
Now I realize I'm actually reading both appended with a biology report with historical footnotes and an introduction written by a psychiatrist...
Carry on...
I'm really enjoying this story so far. Your versions of pony social psychology are very interesting.
This story is getting better, I am glad I stuck around so far. Onward to the next chapter!
Poor Sparkler.
This is a very interesting read. If not for the descriptive style and in depth analysis of each and every view point, emotions and contributing factors alone.
The character building is very well done as well, Bucky is a very interesting character and I like the take on Derpy, her daughters and he back story we are getting.
Feel this is going to be one of my favorite fan fictions out there. If not my favorite story.
I do notice some things that bother me, although minor and hardly expect them be changed.
The constant use of propper nouns tend to get annoying, as a she, he, him or her could make for a much smoother read.
That a side, I am excited to read on!
Couldn't "help" but notice a missing word here. I hope this is "help"ful.
So far, i love this story and am having trouble putting it down.
The only thing that bothers me is how ponies (Derpy and family especially) use contractions so sparsely in conversation. They aren't educated the way unicorns are, so slang seems like it would be more rampant in their speech patterns from my viewpoint. Small nitpick, no biggie if you keep going the way you're going.
Good lord i need to get up to date so my comments have more relevance. ONWARD!
It's exposition like this that makes reading fanfics all the more enjoyable.
Sheepish - showing embarrassment from shame or lack of self-confidence. Embarrassed is a part of the definition of sheepish, therefore you cannot use both adjectives in a sentence.
Sorry if that came out rude. I just found a mistake in your description. Either I'm really horrible at finding mistakes, or you have been a great writer so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter, which I will starting... now!
And she knew why, she understood all to well the practical concerns
1. Too.
Such are cultural misunderstandings. But this begs the question of what was their cultural state a thousand years ago? Better or worse compared to now? Psychology is such a provocative thing and it can be quite intriguing.
I SHOULD'VE STOPPED AT TWO!
This ain't half bad so far. Maybe I'll keep going.
See, I can relate to bucky, I would have surpressed that stuff too...
That was quite a, saucy scene.
I really am loving this the more I read!
Also
Ch6
Yep, hard work. An overstuffed mailbag and and she was still somehow early.
mailbag and she
Ch7
The panic gave him another squeeze, letting him now that it was still there, waiting to pounce.
letting him know that
Hhahahahahahaaha
I found my new favorite phrase
I love it. this ought to keep me busy for a couple weeks. Bring it on!
Gurl you go right ahead.
Dude, awesome chapter xD Gawd I love all of this stuff going on...
I also smell a triangle of sorts :| Filthy, Bucky, Derpy, shitstorm incoming.
nice job!
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Derpy is simply the sexiest mare.
semicolon instead of comma after clear.
Bucky oh Bucky, why didn't you just say "Your wings are like storm-clouds, I love storm-clouds" then it would have been Bazinga!
Found this fix linked through a group message and its been sitting on my later list for awhile now. Finally decided to give a go, I must say I'm hooked. Really like how the characters are set the unique cultural background.
I know what I'm gonna be reading for the next considerable future.
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bruh i was at chapter 800 something and my brother got pissed at me and unchecked the read chapters
don't dare jump around and spoil things so I'm starting over
There is an itch
It is a sweaty itch
In her glands
Really though when you think about it, Unicorns are secretly the laziest race. I mean what is it that they really give back to society? What do they really work, compared to the other races?
I mean I would be a Unicorn, but all too often when you think about it, all the heavy lifting for Society is done by the other Races. At least that's the way I see it.
Also Filthy's depiction is all too common with many Rich people. Even many CEOs that have good hearts, have lost touch with their work force, and the demands placed upon them. It's all too easy on the top to see your lowest workers, whom you have the last contact with, as just numbers and not people.
It is so weird reading your earlier work. You've streamlined the process a lot in the weed world stories. Here the exposition is kinda being shoved down my throat and while not bad by any means this fic is clearly less refined. You hadn't learned to properly sprinkle it here yet it seems.
That is an amazing goal to set out to accomplish with this story and an outstandingly creative way of looking at it. Sure, the grammar and lines of thought might not be looked upon fondly by English professors from a university, but so what, this is a unique way to approach a story and you should be proud of yourself. No matter what anyone says otherwise, you are writing a work of art.
Omg how have i not seen this until now?
This is beautiful, good job man.