How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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Oh. So the evil monstrous bitch that is Bucky's "Mother" Did something useful by trying to kill him as a foal. She gave him partial immunity to magical posion
distant
4972350
Already fixed.
Yew
Hmm Big Scary Mares To Keep Away Stupid People Who Actually Think They Will Get Away With hurting him while Derpy is alive
I guess he got his "shield" from his mother after all...
4972373
Well, there are apparently worse things than Ponies after him... though they'd still have to get past the Dark Mistress of Bugs Dinky, Face Smasher Ripple, Lord of Fire Rising Star, Lady of Stone Sparkler. Banshee Slayer Lugus, Mistress of Music and Lightning Lyra, Broodmother Derpy and an Island full of battle hardened ponies loyal to Bucky. The two Myrmadons plus the others that are coming to assist are just making it overkill.
Um... what?
took Yew into
Comma not needed.
"a loyal follower, especially one who executes orders without question, protest, or pity - unquestioning followers."
Damn, does Celestia have some of these? And now we also have ponies that should have no issue shadow diving. Bucky might learn something.
What is 'dis'? o.o
4972410
That happened when I tried to find an error in the find box and things didn't go into the find box I think.
Missing a comma near the end.
“We are here to serve Lady Hooves,” Shadowguard replied.
should read
“We are here to serve, Lady Hooves,” Shadowguard replied.
Also, you introduced 'Shadowguard' as 'Shadeguard' when she first shows up.
4972398
You do know there's no kill like overkill, right?
4972398
They are not the over kill his whole family is I mean come on most anyone of his family by them self is scary heck send him out with sparkler and rising star sparkler is invincible...rising star is pretty much exactly what his name says a star aka big ball of fire and death....remind me never to make the PRINCE mad lol good add in there by the way kudzuhaiku
4972445
Okay, the last one is WEIRD.
Cause in GDocs, that is from the old draft, and in the current draft, and I just got done looking at it, it is all corrected.
But when I copied and pasted it, somehow the old draft ended up as part of the copy and paste. This isn't the first time that this has happened.
4972469
Whups.
Well, there you have it, I've finally contributed editing power. I feel accomplished.
Well, not really, I only caught some tiny things, but still.
I'm reminded of Larry Niven.
4972450
Overkill is the best kill.
Manticore poision, in guessing it is magical in a sence, so bucky's mother saved him... HA!
So many people are saying overkill on the guard but I fear it is not enough. They're facing gods, demigods, and demons...
4972475 You realize that that is the sum total of an editor's job. Tiny little things over an entire novel, little nitpicks like misplaced commas over an entire book (or Trilogy as The Chase has become at this stage) add up to make an editor worth every penny he gets paid. No author will ever be perfect, missing or extra characters etc. Editors just put the glue into all the holes
4972552
Which is why I can't wait to see how FURIOUS she will be when finding that out.
4972573
Yeah, and I've only pointed out, like, three things. It's self-deprecating humor, it just fell flat because the internet lacks inflection.
FINALLY
SOME GUARDS THAT ACTUALLY LOOK COMPETENT :D
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Let us be fair here. Look what happened to Equestria without Luna. And now look at how incompetent/worthless all the Guards Celestia has hired, save a rare few like Shining Armor. Of Course she would actually have competent, useful guards who don't let themselves be taken as prisoners of war for free food and booze and pampering and away from the ground zero that is Canterlot.
I wonder if Luna and Ponyville are still separate from the rest of Equestria? If yes, then I believe the Scorned Mare has just been taken over. If not, then have they just been invaded by Equestria?
It'll be interesting to see what happens in the Lugus/Yew missing chapter!
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I think it has been pretty much Confirmed that Ponyville is all that is truly left of Equestria while the rest of it has gone to hell... which now that I think about it, we have heard NOTHING on Appleloosa or Dodge Junction
4972748
When they said they didn't exist...well, I guess that's how.
Competent royal guards "don't exist". :)
Also, it's come a long, horrible way from snoot bumps and Ponyville.
Wow. Bucky's mother accidentally did something that helped her son survive. Go figure.
I love the Myrmidions. Or I would, if there were such things. I'd love to see Moonbow's reaction to them if they actually existed.
And Yewgus is a beautiful ship. Even if the portmanteau looks kind of off.
Looking forward to more.
4972748 They're not guards. They're Myrmidons. The elite of the elite. No golden armored pansies here.
Dont know how i feel about the herd just rolling over for these guards without question, i mean maybe Rising, Spakler and Ripple could be involved in a bit of an altercation with the guards, i would love it if you would have Ripple lift the helm of one of them with ease while staring at one of the guards, that would make quite the statement "Harm my father in anyway.....at your own peril" just with how she holds it up with one hoof and stare into their eyes........that would be awesome !!!
So the manticore poison gave Bucky a natural resistance to toxins? Neat!
So... Luna has ninjas.
...
Awesome.
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Ninjas are fragile and don't wear hundreds of pounds of heavy armor.
Luna has flying locomotives of death.
4972586 dude hell hath no fury like a scorned mare... And there will be a lot of scorned mares
4972924 Really ? None remember who are the Myrmidons ? Nobody watched that movie where Brad Pit was Achilles ? The Myrmidon are the elite of the elite of the elite. When you nedded to capture a beach, you called the army, when you nedded to win a war, you called The Myrmidons !
I´m can barely wait to see the effect of knowing that such incredible Lunar Pegasi are real uppon Sentinel. In Chase-verse males can be Myrmidons ?
4973170
Sentinel has other plans. Knighthood for one.
However, there is another lunar pegasus in Bucky's tribe...
4973182
*grabs more popcorn*
4972767
Never mind!
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Ripple isn't that strong. Loch is the strong one, Ripple is made for speed.
Neither of them could endure being in several hundred pounds of heavy plate though.
That's gonna be interesting when Bucky is well enough to want to have some fun with his mares.
Don't exist, do they...?
Why duz that make me feel that Celestia is not aware of them and what they are doing?
4972814 But I loved the snoot bumps and ponyville ;_;
BUT THEN IT GOT DARK AND GORY AND DEATH AND I LAUGHED
..........wut
4972828 Ikr
death in the dark
(omg that should totally be their motto/slogan/thing)
kudzuhaiku!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4972598 Curse you written medium not transmitting inflections
I need more Chase. I NEED MY FIX!!!
*Twitches while in a fetal position*
Any hints on who these enemies of Bucky are?
4974059
Get this man an earthpony *STAT*
4973170
Yes basically they are navy seals, Small team of elite warriors specialized in unique missions that require specialist that are also powerful warriors. I'm guessing Grim is their field medic.