How far will one stallion run to escape what pursues him?
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scorned mare nearly done, derpy has an ass kicking apprentice and bucky is going crazy protective. i really find it hard to see any faults with this story
I hope Lugus makes it back ok. But knowing The Chase universe, that isn't very likely.
him instead of his
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Lugus is a major minor character. He has a role to play.
4892159 Ok good, that means he is safe.
Unless you decide kill him off later.
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No, he has a foal to raise.
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He Lives!!!
Come on Bucky, make the amulet! After that you could try to push yourself to type 6!
Hey, Bucky... stop that. That sort of thinking will lead you off course. Remember Sombra's mistake was that he feared sharing the burden with his family. That path your thinking of going down ends with that dream you had. Sombra's darkness was too much for one pony to bare, remember that the role of earth ponies are to bare your burden, Sombra didn't have earth ponies. Remember that the darkness you share with your family is something you bare together and together you can bare anything.
Bucky is already figuring out his inner conflict. It's how he handles it that will matter. His guilt on using Dinky...he owes her a HUGE tea party when they get back to Equestria.
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Read some of the replies made... they explain a great deal.
4892175 You make it seem as if kudzu is G. R. R. Martin Jr.
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The death toll is shockingly low...
4892462 No. All I'm saying is that a lot of bad things happen on the isles since it's not a very safe place at the moment. So a dead griffon/pony probably isn't uncommon.
Should it be my intrusion or our intrusion? I'm kindof confused if Lugus is the guard. I'm not seeing a smooth handoff between the guard speaking and Lugus.
Quick, gather all of the Pegasi and feed them spicy things!
It feels like we're about to transition into My Little Pony®: The Chase™: Mobile Suit Gundam® edition (or some other similar type of anime).
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There is a whole paragraph break between Lugus and the guard. What?
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I was just momentarily confused by the guard only referencing "his" intrusion, instead of "our" intrusion, and then Lugius seemingly startling to speak out of nowhere.
Hey kudzu is not R.R Martin lol at least kudzu is not obsessed with floppy penises!!!!!!
I cannot WAIT to see the return to Equestria proper, and the total shite-storm over there!
Yep, Bucky is making pony Mjlonir.
Extra space.
Heh, Derpy being a bit put out because Ripple grabbed the filly!
Dear god now there are two of them
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It is mentioned in the story that when a group of unicorns went bad, when they went rogue, they were called a coven.
Bucky and his group have gone bad.
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Possibly three.
4893699 ... Mother of god
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Well, she suspects that Sentinel is like her and Ripple...
Bucky is going down a dangerous line of thought. I don't like this...
Lupine, unless you're referring to a French gentleman-thief or his Japanese grandson.
Also, holy crap, a griffon whose name doesn't begin with "G". There are disappointingly few of those on this site.
I love the intimidation factor of the two brooders and Crush's... well, Crush in general, really. I'm honestly not sure whether that bear hug was intended as a "you're not invincible" or a "be careful, you loveable idiot." Or both.
I'm glad that Bucky doesn't like his current thought process. That misguided sense of self-sacrifice is what paved Sombra's road to Tartarus. Still, I hope Dinky's alright...
Looking forward to more.
Good thing unicorns are good at everything and wear all the armor and know how to fight effectively with no training.
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You're making assumptions.
Just wait.
I must not have any memory because i forgot who crush was, was he one of the refugees?
4909348 No, crush is the metalworker. He runs the forge.
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Making assumptions? I thought he was being sarcastic...
Another well done chapter dude, awesome job on this!
Broody pony~
I, uh... I don't think that's a particularly good idea.
6818727 i totally agree. Old world blues for the win baby.