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Thank you! It turned into a much larger project than what I had anticipated. It was fun, but I'm glad the story came to a natural closing point and I can work on other projects more now.

Congratulations on finishing Gathering Pieces!

I'm really glad you stuck with it! :twilightsmile:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much!
Would you mind leaving your comment on the story though? I like them all in one place, like a discussion. :twilightsmile:

I read it, I promise! I gave it an up-vote too!

Your approach to the student six was great. While they all have a lot of potential as characters, Gallus allows for the most play for authors. I can see him having a variety of issues, due to his background. You showed his despair at being 'unwanted' very well. Your take on Yona was great. She has never come across as slow to me, and you skillfully show that having a different education, and a language barrier, does not mean that a creature is not sharp. Silverstream annoys me like Pinky Pie annoys me, due to her over exuberance, but you made her into an relatable character in the way that you presented all the pressures on her and how they were crushing her. All of your approaches to the students were great, to be honest. I will be going through the rest of your stories. I really like your writing style and want to see what else you have written.

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Thank you! · 8:53pm Jan 5th, 2014

This is much belated and I apologize for that, but life has been running me into the ground here lately. Thank you all so much! My story "Choosing of the Guard" took fourth place in the Equestria Daily's Bat Pony Write Off event.

You are all wonderful! I cannot tell you how much I appreciate your support!


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