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Dicefire5


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First of all, though very late, thank you for taking your time to both read and leave me such a constructive comment in The Moon's Tear and sory if I never bothered with it before.

I have to say, back when I first started this story, I had a completelly unorganized, non-professional and even childish style of puting ideas together. I never gave then too much thought, was afraid of re-reading my own work because I usually decided everything I wrote sounded like trash, was in the middle of learing English and going through too much mental turmoil. And when someone offered me proofreading, it was only with gramar and some cannon stuff.

Right now, being a little more sociable, organized, confidente and actually learning something about real writing, I totally understand your point and even thought about rewriting this story, but I don't know how to properly do it considering the people who actually kept with me even in the earliest (and a little worse) days of this story.

Reading the first chapter now, after a few years and beginning to recover, as a reader and not as a writer, I still like the idea, it soounds like something with potential, as you said, but even I would have a hard time connecting and keeping up with this tale.

I still don't know what I will do with the current state of this story, but I am certainly comming back to it with actual effort to improve both myself and the story.

Thank you for the favorite.

Thanks for the fave on "Human After All!" :pinkiesmile:

Thank you very much for adding "Dawn" to your favourites. I hope you'll keep enjoying it. :twilightsmile:

Hey, thanks for adding my story to your libraries! I'm glad to see you're enjoying it so far :twilightsmile:
Praise on, Sunbro! \[T]'/

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