After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Meh it's ok
I do like how this redo started off from the old version. The last time I read it, it had Naruto facing off against Ombra in the middle of an open field and that was good...but I found this one appealing to me more. That's not to say I didn't like the old version, it's just that, I don't know, I think it may have just been the fact that we got a new take on why Celestia had decided to send Twilight to Ponyville and it gave Naruto a reason to be there other then the whole 'there at the wrong time' thing most people do that grabbed my attention. The idea of the element wielders having to have a connection before Nightmare's return for the elements to work really made sense in the long run, and that might have been what got my attention in the end.
I like the rewrite. Naruto and Celestia seem closer.
I can't remember when was the last time I watched naruto... I think it was like... Six years ago when I suddenly stopped
Nice pic btw
For an intro to the story this was very well done.
I can't say I can compare the old with the newly redone chapters here but from the general gist of the other commenters it must have been a major change up. Really enjoyed your Celestia here and Naruto's thoughts of her. As I've stated in previous comments, I feel that Tia tends to get the short end of the stick in fanfics but this was a great chapter in establishing her character outside of the basic Celestia tropes that plague a good chunk of stories here. It's nice to read a fic that makes her out to be a friendly and caring monarch who worries about her subjects.
6206373 yeah me too, the last chapter i have seen of naruta was years ago
Is this story anthro?
6692167 Yeah bro, just read the tags
Wonder if Naruto will still be able to:
1) Talk to Kurama and enter Nine tails chakra mode
2) Still be able to perform Rasengan and his other jutsus.
Finally found a good Naruto x MLP fic.
:D
Celestia is looking right at Naruto's crotch in that picture, for real.
From the description of the guards all of them have the exact same appearance with the exception of the higher ranks like captains. Naruto and Celestia greeting really shows that they've known each other for a while now since they can talk so casual with each other. Hearing her talk about Nightmare moon show there alot of pain and regret towards her which is understandable. And the fact that she asking him for help in finding the elements shows that she trusts him quite a bit. I think its off to a very strong start.
Is it just me or does that first picture all the females look like those over exaggerated attractive guys.
Wait...what?.....Is this a sequel to something? Coz whats goin on?
Hahaha omg i havent had such a good laugh in a while. I dont mean to be dissrespektfull or mean or anything like that, but to whoever that made that first picture it was so bad that it became good again. God bless you friend and keep making em.
7850495 Okay take a look at the image now.
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No seventh element of harmony, Naruto actually seems to have character depth given the prologue, this alone is enough for an upvote.
Though uh, there's a section where it just cuts pretty hard about what's going on.
It cuts from a flashback straight into where Celestia is 'now' and it's a bit jarring. Plus it seems like a bit of backstory got aborted.
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It was a vold opening. I since added a prologue.
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Well been looking for a new artist. Its hard to find a good anthro artist.