After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I really enjoyed this chapter. It was adorable watching Twilight get all flustered due to Naruto asking her out as well as Celestia shipping those two and the way Naruto interacts with Shy. Good chapter.
the troll was always strong with fire bird.
"W-What? You mean…like a date? Like courting? B-Between a stallion and mare like date? Of course you mean that what else kind of date would it be? Well besides two mares not that I'm saying you're a mare."
And Naruto shows the girls his signature move, "the ninjutsu Centerfold technique".
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Nope, I can't ever remember seeing those. Must be an arc I missed.
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Its common fanon. I think you can find it in every other HiE story.
If this is suppose to be an anthro story, why is it that at times it mentions front legs instead of hands or arms?
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What? Where?
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And this is just from "That Applebuckin!" chapter.
I've been seeing problems like this every once in a while ever since I started reading this story along with many grammatical errors.
I know it's not my place to tell you this but I suggest you read your story so you can find all the kinks you missed.
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I have betas, but unfortunately they seem genre blind to that error. Its a result of this story being previously pony version, but I changed it.
If this episode has shown me anything, it’s that Celestia’s pet, just like Celestia herself, is a joker that likes to trick ponies. I’m actually surprised that this chapter didn’t focus on Naruto and instead, mostly focused on Fluttershy and Celestia’s pet phoenix. Where the money really shined for me in this chapter was literally the interaction between Naruto and Twilight. I’m a big fan of the “Adorkable Response” stories from Fanfiction, so seeing that Twilight is going to go on a ‘date’ with Naruto really makes me smile. I honestly can’t wait now to see their date since I loved the “150% More Twilight” chapter.
They do say that some pet's share similar personalities with their owners and Philomena certainly takes after Tia in both the appearance and troll department's. This was a fun episode to read and Naruto again felt in place here with his help in making Tia's visit seem more at ease then in canon. The fact that we got to read from Tia's POV and her subtle attempts of cracking the ice threw humor made the chapter that much sweeter. I'd honestly forgot that this is where Naruto and Twi's date formed from his complementing her looks from his brief with Celestia and her opening up for scheming with Cadence in getting the two to hook up. Honestly, it was another fun chapter of character development with a great mix of humor and hijinks that tend to follow the Mane 6 like a plague.
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