After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Yeah well I wanted to elaborate more on Celestia's capture as well as work in Alicorn Amulet instead of it being a random one off weapon. Having it be a creation of Nightmare Moon's to Bolster her powers seems like a good idea. The reason why she needed this Amulet will of course be shown in a much later arc. XD.
Also you think this is fun? You're going to enjoy the humor parts of where everypony in town is shipping Naruto with somepony or another with this big gambling pool involved.
i cant remember if you said in the original but where in the story was Naruto before he was sent to equestria?
The fighting match ups are interesting.
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Was never stated.
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I do have plans to make a fic with just that pairing though. Probably on Deviantart. I definitely have the images for it.
Dividing up the Mane 6 to deal with their own enemies was a nice change of pace. It's interesting to see them have to deal with problems on their own, instead of having them all rely on each other, showing us just how well they can deal with matters on their own if the situation calls for it and showing us just how strong they are. I know the shows about friendship and all that, but sometimes it's better to take a different route if you feel the need to.
Great showing of Naruto kicking ass long enough to distract the Nightmare forces from hunting down the civilians and getting out when things got a little to disadvantageous when NM called in backup. Not the biggest fan of a straight slobber knocker when the hero lays low a whole army/50-1 odds. Yeah Naruto is almost godlike by the end of the manga but having him wipe out an attacking force so soon is a bit too much so early. So good job on having Naruto do the smart thing and stay around long enough too see what he's up against.
Wasn't expecting Sweet Apple Acres as the site for the civilians to use as safe zone is probably the first time I've read that happening. Looking at it it probably would be a good place to hide out for short notice and it seems that NM is still basking in her return at this time. Also having Lyra being something other then her human-obsessed self is such a plus and the fact she's a beast magic wise is a great bonus. The whole human-obsessed pony personality gets old when that sums up her character.
The trip to the old castle was very well done and everyone got a good amount of screen time and Naruto didn't feel like he was forced into the scenes like some writers have a tendency to do here with it being the first major event between the Mane 6. Naruto didn't take center stage here but was rather the much needed extra words of wisdom that the girls needed to help set up each of the girl's role in the group.
Also the artwork is doing a pretty good job of pointing out some of the more highlighted moments in each chapter.
Hoo boy, this is getting intense!
Yeah a Manticore is quite tough.
I like Naruto's new fighting style, its better than just rushing in head first and he takes the time to observe and plan how to best deal with his opponents. Yeah Nightmare Moon does seen like she wouldn't take any kind of defiance well. Sweet apple acres would be a good place to hide out for a while after a event like this. Its always nice to give the background characters some dept. Actually will their be any chapters that have the backgrounds characters in the spotlight like Big mac or Lyra and Bon Bon, or the Spa ponies or Vinyl and Octavia or even Mayor mare? You never know what kinds of adventures they might get into while the main six or in this case seven go off to save the world. Its a great that Naruto uses his head more and plans everything out more. Good thing Naruto and PinkIe senses warned them of the traps on the way to the old castle. Looks like Twilights learning to trust her new friends. The manticore sounds a lot more threatening here. A spell is more believable than a thorn in it's paw. Hah no time for a song this time. It's kind of weird than Steven just disappeared after this and just reappeared in season four but that was very generous of Rarity and very kind of Steven to help them fight Nightmare Moon's goons. Cute little moment with Naruto and Twilight. The first appearance of Hot steak. Things are heating up.
So, going by Naruto canon he's killed gods before. Or equivalent thereto. He's also been blown up, cut with a sword, set on fire, shocked, beaten, etc. I imagine he's comparatively wimpy thus far because he's "still recovering" and killing Celestia's sister would be bad.