After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Whaaaat? I caught up already? Well shit. I'm a little upset I caught up so soon, but then, that just means the plot, as well as the storyline itself, is very enthralling.
So! Time to play the waiting game, I suppose. See ya next chapter, Kyuubi!
Oh, and if there's anything you may need help with, I'll be happy to help. I've noticed multiple slight mistakes with confusing the word "fate" with "faith". What I managed to spot weren't really noticeble, and were actually auto-corrected by my brain as I read through.
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Cold Brew is going to be an interesting read..
Also its going to be so interesting to see how things progress from that point on. There is so much to Trixie'
s roll to come as well as everything that is set in motion.
Yep, this chapter did a damn good job of straightening out the major issues that the girls have had with each other since becoming friends. If there's one thing that bothers me about the Mane 6 its just how mean the six of them can come off at each other at the drop of the hat. A good chunk of their issues in future episodes could have been worked out if they would have just sat down and dished out their beefs. Instead we had to deal with half-cocked solutions like Mare Do Well that painted the girls out as being insensitive jerks that bat their eyes to get out of trouble.
Other then how I enjoyed Naruto basically being a coach in getting the girls to open up and allowing Rarity to actually lead the discussion I'd have to say that your author notes sums up my feelings about how this will help the girls. Again this was a much needed chapter since it lays a ground work on changing some of the more bone-headed episodes from canon where the girls just treat the others like crap in their "Me first" episodes.