After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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rule zero, don't anger the momma bear. that goes quadruple if she has magic.
Hell hath no furry when a mama bear comes to protect her cub
7509743 Then if she has god levels of power you multiply the threat to your life to about that of surviving a nuclear detonation... while standing on the bomb in your birthday suit.
Never mess with momma bear, especially if she can use magic. Protecting their child is something no being can stop
for some reason i find the idea of a displaced falling into this equestria a really funny side bit like how the displaced from "off course" fell into the "a wolf among ponies" universe it would also play into how naruto was talkin to celestia about finding his universe and seeing if they are alright it will be even funnier that the displaced tell naruto his life was an anime on there world and recounted some things from his life.
this chapter was so awesome can't wait for more
7515276 Lol hell yeah. Those images cost money. Cutting cost by reusing footage. XD
Had to do some digging for the villains on this one but outside of that it was an excellent chapter. We got to see some call backs to the old series while at the same time changing things up a bit so that it fell into place with your story's vision. Catrina is as mid level as you could go as a villain for the girls to face on their own and a great way to showcase their combative growth without Naruto there to bail them out. AJ, Dash and Twi were spectacular here and it was heartwarming to see Twi rescue her daughter from a genuine threat if given the circumstances.
Finally before I forget I wonder how Flutters would be if she ran into some Bushwoolies? The sheer amount of adorableness would probably cause foes such as Tirek to turn into goo.
(the moment before Twilight decks her)
Catrina:
Ch.238 Mama Twilight Goes Ham! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
What in the World does "Goes Ham!" even mean?
It should be either: six to seven feet high or sixty to seventy feet high, I don't think the first choice is Big enough, and the Second choice is too big. Maybe you should go with Twenty to Thirty, or Forty to Fifty, or even Twenty to Forty feet high.
Yeah you bucked up
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and Twilight's reaction "I'm sorry I don't give a f**k." Sorry had to referance that.