After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
Page generated in 0.045 seconds
Total duration
809 users online
972,384 hits today, 2,439,861 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Kinda wish you had Applejack apologize for hitting Naruto in the groin. Sure he'd probably forgive her anyway, but hey, I feel that she still should have been shown apologizing.
Thank god that Ditzy showed up when she did otherwise Rarity may have taken those parenting guides to heart. I'm just as surprised as she was that she didn't think of Ditzy when it came to parenting tips since she had Ame and Dinky to raise by herself for a good length of her life. Hopefully Rarity won't have too much trouble with Scoots as the story progresses; then again it could happen.
Speaking of Ditzy, thank you for not bothering with the destruction of town hall caused by her-ahem-booty. Sure it was a funny gag at the time but the scene just leaves a bitter taste in my mouth after the whole Derpy/Ditzy voice controversy. I much prefer the town needing funds due to the Nightmare Children's attack. Makes it way more believable here in your story as Ditzy isn't just a quick comedic effect prop or fan service.
The Last Roundup was always a frustrating episode to watch due to Applejack's pride getting in the way of her common sense. Sure, AJ promised a lot of things before setting off to Canterlot, but I have a feeling that her family just wanted her to enjoy herself. This episode progressed mainly towards the same as its counterpart with Naruto acting as the voice of reason so that the herd didn't cause too much of a panic before they went in search of their herd sister.
I do feel that AJ got off a little too easily for basically running away from home due to shame and then kicking her stallion in the junk. I'd at least like to see Naruto prank her for the pain it caused or cut off their alone time for a bit as punishment.
6404904
He's not going to prank her or retaliate. It would come off as childish and petty. Sometimes you got to let these things go.
Awww man... I was hoping to see this. But I like this ending too.