After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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8003779 That is quit an improvement from the last one and good job! Thumbs up
8004353 No, no, congratulate Amnooesa. I commissioned the piece.
That is a really cool picture. I can't wait to see the rest of the pictures when they post.
8005785 this new cover picture is way better than your original one. I'm serious it's perfect.
8021684 New artist.
8023434 sweet, what's their name?
8023865 Amensoona.
This was a great fight. The constant back and forth between Naruto and the overlord was amazing and it seem more like a battle between wills and ideas. Also I guess future Twilight going to try to end this herself and is leaving something behind to make sure their future isn't a repeat of hers. Overall a exciting chapter and can't wait for the finale. One thing, would this be considered Naruto's true path since he's never really faced a version of himself that's fallen, especially when he has prime examples why not to?
Keep up the good work
Sorry for the late review here. Had major changes at work this last month.
The Overlord is certainly forgetting that his past self was known for being unpredictable within a fight and it seems to be biting him in the ass this chapter. I can understand his confidence in defeating Naruto seeing as he is from the future but to forget about the 9 Bijuu is a critical error on his part. Hopefully by destroying both the sword and jewel Naruto can just overcome whatever new power up Overlord Naruto is about to throw at him. Fun back and forth throughout this chapter as the fight turned in Naruto's favor once the shock fell away.
Ch.260 Mechanical Empire! Clash of Two! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.