After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I approve!
Get rid of the k and put a space between apple and pie.
The date was pretty sweet. I really like how Naruto treated Luna so kindly.
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Of course you approve. I just wish you guys could give me breakdowns like thatonebrony. That guy knows how to make you feel like you wrote some real content. I'm always looking for more consultants so if you have Luna idea now's your chance to give them.
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You want to be my new beta?
Mustache approved
5480789 Sorry, don't have enough time.
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Dude it be hot as hell on that continent. Also history. You know what I mean, right? Actually the original version of the scene would have had Zecora try to seduce Naruto, but I cut it out to save time.
Nice date chapter, really felt comfortably intimate without overdoing it.
I may have to start rooting for Luna after this chapter.
Noticed a marked reduction in errors this time around. Just a couple homonyms and mistypes.
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Who were you rooting for initially?
Naruto you romantic bastered
5482364 Always had a soft spot for Pinkie or AJ. Perhaps earth ponies in general.
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I guess that's something.
This was the chapter I had beeen looking to for a long time now. While I am big on the Naruto x Rarity realtionship in this story, this one has to be a close second, and this chapter has cemented it for me. While there wasn't much romance (more in the kissing and cudling kind) in this chapter, which make sense considering this is only their first date, I found it to be a perfect chapter. I'm actually excited to see where this will end up, and have my fingers crossed Luna is one of the harem mates later on. Maybe it's the fact that Naruto knows how Luna currently feels, being alone most of his life too, or maybe it's just how adorable you make her out to be, but that's one of the reason that I love this pairing so much.
Naruto, you should know by now that the only way Tia has any kind of fun while going about her duties is by trolling her way through Canterlot. If she didn't have that she would most likely have went insane due to the sheer ego that saturates that city from the nobles. How Tia did so for so long by herself I'll never know but it must have been a drag before Twilight showed up.
Still enjoy the relationship that both Naruto and Celestia share here. I feel that Naruto has went a long way in helping Tia break through the facade she has constructed around herself ever since banishing Luna. Their friendship is a joy to read due to how easy it is for them to relate to each other in their past experiences as basically being Gods among the general populace of their respected races. It was also nice to read Tia's explanation on why she isn't overly surprised in Luna's affection towards Naruto; very neat background info on why the guard had such a quick response during Nightmare's return.
Luna and Celestia's conversation and thoughts before the date were a nice look into their dynamic as sisters and how it has changed. It's very easy to see that Tia is beginning to show signs of pining for what Luna has with Naruto. She can't deny her feelings for too long or someone-Luna-will most likely throw the two into a locked room to settle their budding feelings. That tension, man.
The date itself was very charming and didn't leave me feeling as if it was stale. Both of their initial reactions upon seeing one another were a blast to read and its no deny that Luna had found her own knight in shining armor. Tia throwing in some last minute ribbing certainly broke them from their awkward hand wringing from growing. I am a bit disappointed that there was still hecklers towards their co-ruler here, but the wounds left by Nightmare Moon are still fresh even 1,000 years later. Good job on Naruto's part in making sure Luna's funk didn't ruin her first break since returning whole again.
Hope nobody commented this yet but,
Swiggity swooty Naruto's coming for that booty.
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