After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Glad to see that Naruto and Dash finally had their date. I'm also curious to see if Milano would date Naruto. He'd be a great influence to Button Mash. Now twilight is the last of the girls he has to date from the Mane 6.
I love that cover art
With a bookworm like Twi who probably has little to no experience in dating, or romance entirely, and would rather do everything in life "by the book", rather experience it first hand. I wonder how hilariously awkward her experience with Naruto will be?
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Aahh yes thank you. I've commissioned many more images.
just finished a readthrough up to this point. gotta say you gotta gem of a story hiding in there, just need to get a proof reader and go through it and do some editing on spelling, grammer and luna's dialogue. will keep reading and thanks for writing!
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I got an editor, he just has a job :p So it takes awhile for some of the chapters.
It feels like the shipping storm is coming to an end soon.
Ok, it's quite obvious that he's most likely going to have a small harem with Twilight and Luna (I would also say Rarity but I have a feeling that Necklace is something else. If it's from the show I wouldn't know, haven't seen it in forever) (That or he chooses between the 2 but since he's the Main Character that's unlikely since I've yet to see someone do that). To be honest I don't like harem fics. But, I will at least attempt to read this to see if it's any good (Harems typically tend to ruin the fic since most of the ones I've read it seems like they just add a Harem to have a reason for the Romance Tag. Or they ruin it by making him seem perfect and adding Most of the Main Six and/or One or both Princesses to the Harem), but first I want to know if you are doing a Harem and, if you are, are you at least going to keep it to just those 2 and not suddenly have everybody falling in love with him.
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I would just say for you to bow out now. Save us both time.
So, finally the Rainbow Dash x Naruto ship has come around in full circle and we finally get a date between the two. I’ll admit, I was a fan of the teasing that always happened between her and Naruto, so I curious to see how you played Rainbow Dash’s character during the date and I was not disappointed. It’s nice to see that even with her constant teasing, sometimes all she really wants is to be treated like one of the girls. I’m really hoping she gets added to the herd later on
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You'll be happy that more of the teasing will carry on.
Really enjoyed that the chapter gave us a bit of Dash's POV at the start. Even if it was briefly done it and her confession to Naruto about how stallions see her was very effective in showing how much depth this version of Rainbow is to her canon counterpart. Being seen as the cute town tomboy probably does drag on her day by day.
Naruto bluntly stating that he finds Dash attractive probably through her for a loop since before the big confession Naruto kind of tip toed around such situations. Bring Dash to Rarity's was probably both an honest showing of Dash's looks and possibly some revenge for the past teasing. Doesn't help that Dash flustered Rarity right off the bat after her and Naruto's PDA.
The date itself was again very well done and on par with the others. Dash's "transformation" from tomboy to bombshell probably did throw Naruto and the rest of Ponyville for a loop seeing her so dolled up. Overall this was a nice catch up chapter for Dash and Naruto's relationship and strengthening it.
HA Jetzt ist das lustig
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