After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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So you couldn't wait for the date to be over before having someone tying to kill him huh?!
goddamn cliffhangers.
great chapter as always Dude, keep it up!
Aaaaaaand the cliffhangers once again.
Why does it have to be a cliffhanger. But I love fluttershy drawing.
Nice job incorporating the character, you really made her your own.
I wonder how you'll handle her fight scene. When I created her character and wrote that scene with the arrow, she was heavily inspired by Yondu Udonta from the Guardians of the Galaxy film, so I'm interested in seeing if you continue to use him as inspiration.
And thanks for the shout out it means a lot.
I really liked Shy's appearance in the chapter, she looks beautiful/hot. Likewise, Vanity seems like an interesting villain if she's going to have two chapters.
Multi-clone jutsu! going to f**k with you.
And when Naruto realizes that Vanity is after Shy, all bets are off.
Oh. A condemned one is attacking Naruto... And here i thought the date would go bad
And the literature god said, "Let grace abound!" and there was an update. Awesome work as always. Though slightly expected Nightmare Rarity for the attacker. Nice twist!
Vanity must have took lessons from Sasori.
I like how your giving Fluttershy’s character a little upgrade from her shows counterpart. Not to much to make her completely different, but just enough to keep her character almost the same. Character development, no matter how small is one of my favorite things about this story. This Vanity character is an interesting one, I feel like she’s based off an anime villain I saw a while ago, but I’m most likely just over thinking it.
Dun dun dooooon!!
Holy throne! That was impressive right there!
well then shes screwed never piss oss a ninja expecially if he is the jinjurikki of the nine tailed demons
ON HELL NNOO!! Hang on!
Rewinds to when Vanity sees them and appears behind her with a .45 auto pistol with Silencer from New Vegas.
*PEW**PEW**PEW*
"I AM NOT LETTING YOU RUIN THIS!" I say in a strained whisper
You stupid foal.
It's nice that every pony congratulating Naruto for his porposal to Rarity since it show that the town is mostly close with each other. Fluttershy is adorable when she's worrying about her date, and it's good she learned when to be soft and when to be strict sooner than later. Well that thought shows a side of her that will be interesting to explore lol. And Vanity makes her first appearance, wonder if she can be saved.