After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Surprise butt grope... DENIED!
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Ah Trixie like getting grope
Do I smell a new marefriend in the making
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Its always nice to have some world building.
Really enjoyable fights between Twilight and Trixie; certainly better then the show. I'm not the biggest fan of Trixie but I've found her to be mostly tolerable within the realm of fanfiction. I do like the initial rivalry between Twilight and Trixie but after reading retreads of the same encounter wears on you, ya know?
This chapter gave a bit more meaning behind Trixie's return to Ponyville other then, "rah, Twilight Sparkle must pay" like canon. Here that thought is still in her mind but is tempered by Midnight's dark machinations in killing two birds with one stone. I will say that I wish that Trixie actions were a bit more drastic to give her a bit more reason to freak out over her actions, but that's just me wanting darker themes. It's nice that Twilight didn't have a lynch pin in Naruto too shoulder the burden and actually making her solve the problem herself. It definitely showed her growth since season 1 in a positive light.
Also I can't say I blame Naruto in his gaffe with grope Trixie but things could definitely be awkward between the two. I'm kinda iffy on if Trixie makes it into the herd but I'm neutral either way.
Ha that last part
Damn it that is disrespectful, she is dying damn it.