After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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It makes so much sense in hindsight.
Congrats man your now a mass murderer of children may luna have mercy on your soul cause the ponies wont... who am i kidding luna wont have any either shes gonna be all kinds of pissed you should watch your dreams cause when she finds out its over no more good nights sleep
6:12 you will know when to play it
If these past two chapters aren't the best way to end an epic arc such as this then I don't know what would. Other then how masterfully this final showdown between chaos and harmony became I have nothing else to report. The interactions and reactions throughout these last two chapters were very well done without being overwritten with needless exposition. Everything was short, sweet, and to the point without trying to be to wordy by way of more action scenes and back and forth struggles. I'm so used to reading bloated battle chapters that I was a bit weary to see how this was going to go. Sure, some people love 15,000+ words of nonstop action but to me it can get exhausting if a battle surpasses such a word count.
I will say that I'm very curious about how Midnight will use her boon from Discord, but I can wait since this season seems to be taking a larger step away from canon then season 1. Knowing how more sinister the villains of your 'verse are compared to their canon counterparts I have a feeling it means some rocky roads for Naruto and the gang. Also I'm happy that you cleared up exactly how dark this story will become since grimdark and angst fest fics are a big turn off to me as a reader. Sure I enjoy reading darker elements within stories but only to a certain extent due to the fact that most get to the point that the story is a numb husk that leaves me disgusted that its initial potential goes down the drain.
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Yeah you're thinking of pity.
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So much win. XD. I actually had to cut out a part of this battle because it would have been too much like that.
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Yeah. Who the hell wants some FiM related that's depressing as hell or tortures the characters? That speaks of the writers having problems.
But yeah I am working on actually retooling some episodes to essentially show things as seriously instead of playing for laughs or for drama. Hopefully you will continue to enjoy what's to come.
Won't the rest of the world be annoyed by the Sisters? A prisoner under their supervision escaped and nearly destroyed the planet. I imagine that the political repercussions will be dealt with eventually.