After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Oh cool a fairy tail reference (the flute)
Ok this chapter have Fairy Tail reference. Nice
Looking forward to seeing Naruto thrash him in the rematch.
Bright Star, Nightwing, and Thunder Shock are very neat and enjoyable OC's. This chapter did a great job of adding to their personalities outside of being just a select group of guard ponies who follow Naruto about. I really enjoy how enthusiastic Bright Star is compared to Nightwing's pragmatism; they're the perfect fit for a company of soldiers.
I see that Fairy Tail possibly influenced this chapter and all I can say is that you have great taste in using some elements from the series. After burning out with Naruto and One Piece, I'm glad I gave Fairy Tail a chance. Love the whole series and its diverse amount of characters for a shounen series!
I can already tell I'll hate Perfect Storm by the end of this season and for that congrats. From just this brief glimpse in his fight with Naruto, I can already see that Naruto may have to take the kids gloves off for a change and go all out in defeating him. I see a couple of epic slug fests in the future featuring these two and I'm all for it.
It's nice to see more of Thunder Shock since he, Dust Treader, Bright Star and Night Wing are some of the more prominent OCs in the story. It's good to see how much they've grown and that they aren't just nameless guards. Amazing fight scene, the three of them got to show their stuff. Seem like Naruto had a little trouble at first with him but that was just him trying to feel Perfect Storm out and not going full force against him. Perfect Storm seem like the kind of villain that just kills because he can and that he honestly enjoys it. Naruto hasn't dealt with that many major villains that are true monsters like Black Zetsu and Kaguya. His more prominent villains like Obito and Nagato were misguided and manipulated by others, while ones like Zabuza and Haku were only enemies by circumstance. Well look like he got away but one things for sure, this was just round one.