After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Sigh.
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Its going to be a hold over or ever changing til I get an artist to commission a new one. The old one was with the idea that only Rarity, Twilight, Luna, and later on Fluttershy as the only ones for the pairing hence why you only see cues for the first three in the original image.
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I enjoy it when stories do it too.
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As always you pick up on the plot points that no one mentions. XD. But yeah, there will be moments where be moments where the characters struggles, fears, and other negative moments this season will come from the result of having to deal with such a level of physical, mental and emotional tramua instead of just being treated as one off events, they are all simply connected.
In other words I've already got my ideas on how to fix such episodes like Dragon Migration and Mare Do Well mapped out in prototype phases so to speak.
All I can say that Neurotic Twilight is not canon to this story, but kind of high strung and studious Twilight who is dealing with mental scars is.
Nothing much to say here other then making a somewhat average episode fun to read. Definitely enjoyed Naruto's interactions with Sweetie Belle seeing him as an older brother figure. Out of all the crusaders, I've seen Sweetie's relationship with Rarity to be the most realistic whereas Scoots and Rainbow have the most Daw moments.
You seem to have a Cut off 2/3rds to 3/4ths down in this Chapter
(Ch.118 - Amending the Bond of Two Sisters!)
As Applejack and Applebloom walked together towards the next chore, Sweetie Belle forms a frown. "Rarity < Here >
Applejack and Applebloom wiped their faces clean with a towel. Applejack turned to her smiled. "Now that we have all our chores done, what do you say we all have a nice camp-out?"
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Hhm, decided to edit the sentence out. I don't think anything was lost.