After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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6201132
Nothing in canon says you're restricted to what your element is. Just that you're better at the element. Also you haven't read the manga. If you had you know that Naruto gets the other Bijuus chakra and has up to Nine element natures now and can do other nations restricted to blood lines.
6198074
People didn't like his implications? Huh, I don't remember that to be honest.
6195559
I would just say that Kishimoto being Kishimoto or a trend of Shounen writers to rarely develop their main characters and have them keep developing them into more well rounded individuals beyond Protagonist centered Morality.
6198075 Why of course. Its just showing that people have more than one faucet to their personality and that it takes effort to bring it to the surface.
The concept of this couple is that the payoff is worth it in the end.
6198078
Always be worried.
6198079
I think romances that build over the time while fairly well done are just as used or is relied upon too heavily because people try way too hard to subvert the characters/people falling in love too fast/at first sight scenario so they put way too much time and focus on how much time has passed and not focus on the love and how natural the characters feelings for each other are.
6198082
It just shows you how sad the standards of writing are. Its not really all that difficult to keep someone in character. An in character and not overly neurtoic Twilight is of course one of my favorites.
Well I have reached the end of all current chapters. I'm kinda bumed out man.
Well this is in my opinion a great story so far. Although in some spots it's hard to follow every thing that is going on and I make the suggestion that if at all possible to try and make thing flow a little more smoothly. But I will say that you are an excellent writer. The way the story is written is done well and the way you switch between lighthearted fluffy love and serious life/death/fate of the world chapters and what not. I like how the canon story chapters are arranged and all the romance chapters. And then there's the....intimate moments between Naruto and his herd mates. Which are all done well.
Over all for the story so far ill give it a 6.5/10 it would be higher if not for some what I feel is a lack of flow I'm some parts of a few chapters which in hindsight could have been done a little better. Some times is Just a lack of a separating line in between paragraphs. But this is such a great story and I will read this through to the end. Well assuming I stay in good health and what not.
Ill read ya later-BFBL
6202156
Because I actually read the manga where Naruto has all the elements, the Bijuu chakras, and several blood line elements. You know, in the actual manga where it happened.
6202562
I have been going back and updating and fixing the older chapters. I would say come back in six months for a Final Mix rerelease of the fic. XD
6202828
Indeed.
6198090
Its based off some myths yes, I don't remember which ones exactly.
6198092
Of course.
This episode was always a weird one for me. It's not one of my favorites, but I don't hate it either. It's nice that Twilight finally got herself a pet, but I always thought that Spike acted a little out of character for me in this episode. You would think that Spike would know that there is no way Twilight would replace him with an owl and I'm pretty sure this was a cliche with children's shows at the time, so I guess I'm probably just over thinking this one. Still, good chapter, nice interaction between Naruto and Twilights parents, and great action scene.
You know what an famous magical owl is called?
HOOdini.
I'll go to the corner now..
6219105 Did you quote Hoodini or Vanoss's HOOOdini?
6208435 It's not just you, except I hate this episode. It's owlicious that makes me hate this so much; he came out of nowhere and all of a sudden he is loved by everypony, it's no wonder spike became jealous and out of character. I think Mrenter said it best in his review.
wHOO knew?
6847336 -_-
6847336
BOO! 🍅