After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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You have a way of making people feel for the bad guys as well as the good. I enjoyed this chapter immensely and can't wait to see how you continue things as time goes on.
And with this we begin the methodical beat down of the Dark Elements one by one. Pinkie's victory here was a great way to showcase how much she's grown from the first chapters in terms of mental and physical strength to combat her anti-thesis. Tricky was a bit underdeveloped but reading his past certainly helped put some perspective on his road to madness. Great work with this fight though, it was very well maintained and didn't feel jumbled reading the action.
The fact is you are at best a cheap knock off of the real thing. The elements are a power beyond the comprehension of average mortals.
Pinkie's grown so much since season one and there are a lot of disturbing parallels between her and Tricky. Although Tricky is a vicious killer, after reading his backstory you can't help but feel a little sorry for him.