After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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You are the worst teaser for the inevitable NarutoxCelestia that this fic has been pushing for!
I was certainly expecting some scars to remain with Rarity after this debacle but that wasn't the one I had assumed would take the forefront. Great beginning here showing that everyone's favorite fashionista isn't running at peak performance right now. The scars of being possessed are still fresh here and her psyche is not as fully healed as the others first thought. The bathroom scene was a nice surprise and Rarity's rush to see Luna was a very quick and efficient way for a transition to a somewhat depressing start to the chapter. (Sidenote: nice to see that Scoots is warming up to the idea of Rarity being one of her caretakers now.)
Naruto and Tia's scenes here were a great way to break the somewhat dark note that Rarity's distress in finding out what is wrong with her. The fact that Tia dragged Naruto away from work to tease him in finding a dress is something we should come to expect from the Princess of Trolls, right? Having Naruto beat her at her own game and nearly cause the two to do very inappropriate things to one another was probably a bonus for our protag here. Also I wholeheartedly approve of Shipper Cadence! Of course she'd take a course of action in fixing the two of them up.
Luna's talk with Rarity here was a great way I'm sad to say for the two to start a bond brought upon by their horrific experiences with the Nightmare. The fact that the taint of Radiance will still follow Rarity is somewhat disturbing but given the support, she should be able to handle the burden. I found that Luna's advice and wisdom here was spot on with her character and showed that even though she is back Nightmare Moon is still with her. The fact that the dark energies left behind by the Nightmare comes as a dangerous yet useful power is a neat way to tie in the transformation for combat usage. It would certainly be a waste for it to be solely cosmetic and not have some useful abilities.
Midnight's transformation here using what I believe to be Discord's magic should bring some deadly results to the already powerful mare. The fact that the boon that Discord left for Midnight and company is fully manifesting should also bring some fireworks for this seasons endgame. I can't wait to see what happens next!
WELP!
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and is it wrong iffn' i wanna see sauske come in at any point?
'cause this is now relevent-
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lol, appearently Naruto now knows Celestia's weakness, strong hunky male alicorns... that are topless.......by the gods I hope you let cadance capitalize on this hard considering she saw her aunt's reaction after his transformation to get back at her. And furthermore, and this is directed at Cadance, Dang it woman stop playing shadow games and get them together already, i'm sorta tired of them playing footsies with each other on their feelings. Aside from that love the story and can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved Celestia's reaction to Alicorn Naruto and Cadence's decision to ship them together.
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Keep reading before jumping to conclusions.
I hope the whole Naruto spending time with his herd only to rescue them from being rape doesn't become standard routine. As much as I enjoy this story as the next person, I think it degrade the mane six and the other. Don't get me wrong it's great you didn't make either party OP than the other, yet it feel like there have something about them that make them stand out as individual without be taking away their canon personality. I like to see how both Naruto and his herd are getting strong and develop clever personality both mentally and physically. I know there are few are not that clever or that knowledgeable of the bunch, but I at least like to see the herd handle their problem more than once.
The mane six I see in anime standard they were be close to being early sailor moon's sailor scout.
By the way enjoy the Princess Celestia and Naruto tease and how Princess Cadence reaction to them.
Also when Rarity was dealing with her Nightmare form 'Radiance' (Even though that the power ponies form name not Nightmare Rarity but I digress) I though it was going to be how Naruto confronted his dark half by accepting he letting go of his hated and accepting his inner self. Yes, she coming to accept her dark half with her friends and family, but it seem a bit little too quick as she as mentality to break before she embrace it as part of her.
So does that mean the condemned are now servants of Discord? It his name after all, not element of chaos.
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The fuck are you even talking about? I can only remember once, maybe twice he saved one of them from being raped. Are you sure you've been reading the story correctly?
6485970 Maybe but it felt like more than that but I'll have to look over them again. Fluttershy twice one from Bones and Vanity. Also Pinkie pie on one chapter. May have mislead you on one my sentence yes he save two of them from being rape while saving the others out of nearly kill or abused. it maybe just me seeing these stories involving OC or crossover heroes outshining the mane heroine from the franchise story.
I not saying anything wrong with your story just me having a hard time. I still enjoy your story though. Maybe next I come up with a legitimize questions and answer.
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Don't Forget that Time he saved Rarity from Ashby.
Of course something like being possessed by a Nightmare entity was going to leave a mark of some kind. Its good that Scootaloo has Rarity to be there for her when Naruto's job calls him away. Celestia really does love to tease Naruto. It actually wouldn't surprise me if Naruto was considered the most handsome stallion Equestia, do they have a magazine where they rank stallions base on their looks, personalities and anything else they might find attractive ? Its good that Rarity could go to Luna about her recent troubles since she the only one who would understand her. This explains the process of turning into a Nightmare. It makes sense that since it was using Luna's magic to give itself a form that Luna could take on Nightmare Moon's form. That's the biggest reaction Naruto's gotten out of Celestia to date Its easy to see that they enjoy their witty back and forths. The sexual tension between them at the end was palpable, they want to show each other how they feel, wonder what's holding them back? Cadance being a shipper fits with her being the princess of love but with how stubborn they both can be she's got her work cut out her and she'll need some help. So Rarity can take on Radiance's form now to not only accept her dark side but use her full potential, that should be interesting later. Its great that Luna now has someone who understands what she with through and the herd's bond has grown to the point that they can feel each others emotions. Well isn't this one big happy family, not. That doesn't bold well
Cadence no. Naruto already has a damn fleet. He doesn't need any more ships.