After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Nice chapter. Still, there are a few grammar mistakes and I think the chapter has some missing lines as we're not given a description of when Deemeter appears, how she looks, and what species she represents.
Lion-O? Really dude? Strange cameo.
Great world building chapter that shed some much needed light on what other species inhabit the world. This chapter alone gives a greater reaction to the crap that happens within Equestria's borders by its fellow world powers and gives the world a more realistic feel. how no one outside of Equestria isn't questioning its problems is beyond me but this is a kids show. Political troubles are probably not that interesting to your normal 6-12 year old.
I do feel that this chapter could use some fleshing out as some of the name drops left me confused as to who was talking and some of the conversations seemed to be a bit abrupt, but otherwise this was a nice start for a summit meeting. I have a general idea so far as to who's in the good and who's in the bad and I would love to see if this summit continues for at least one more chapter. There are some errors but nothing story breaking or super noticeable if you aren't looking for them.
Ugh politics
Lion-O?
BOOYA
I think that the Diamond Dog's Lord Alpha should be named Big Boss
I do always love the appearance of a world stage in these, Equus, Gaia, or what ever an author may deem the world of colorful ponies, is so much more than the machinations of Equestria after all. I say well done to you friend. Also 'the felines of Thundera' ? Thunder cats! Hoooooo!
Hahahahahaha!!!
6939365 YES SOMEONE ELSE WHO UNDERSTOOD IT
6939365
I wonder if there was ever a conference to discuss the threat of Mumm-ra.