After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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heh, that was a wet one alright.
so what is sunbutt's reaction to the air and smells gonna be?
(was listening to fuck away the pain while reading this and it worked WAY too well.)
A lot of missed words but a great but cute chapter none the less
This chapter was great. Naruto and Luna have finally confessed and it coincidentally happened to be the 69th chapter. Great job.
I found the perfect song for this chapter. Ladies and Gentlemen... Frank Sinatra!
Hahaha. 69
did naruto just fuck luna
I hope Kurama come out. A giant nigh all powerful demon fox would make an interesting addition to Equestria.
damn nice :D really wish celestia would also join the harem in the future :3 can see luna and her either fight or teaming up to get to naruto to have fun >:D... would be funny if during one of there dream fun kurama decided to show up lulz.
cheers!!!
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I do plan on going back and fixing the old chapters eventually.
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I know, I know.
Just a little question if it's not too much... I know this is mainly a romance ship fic but... How many chapters until Discord? Because it's going to be Discord, right? I just have for a moment the strange idea of Discord is going to be Eris (Female version of Discord) trying to court Naruto with Chrysalis.
Also a couple of fails and things...
In episode 24 you put "coats and fillies" instead of "colts and fillies"
Chapter 27 "Captai,n" "Captain"
Chapter 31 "Applepiek" "Applepie"
Chapter 33 "ti" "it"
Chapter 46 "Naruo" "Naruto"
Chapter 64 "thigns" "things" "Prowess" "Powers"
In chapter 68, Naruto say 24 years but in Leader it say
Then is around 74 or more, right? Unless he put the age of his new body that it could be only a year or two
Also, I don't remember it well but... Was not Naruto called demon by some in The hidden village of the Leaf when he was a child? That don't go in nicknames? Or is because is a private thing of his past?
And now that I see, when Naruto see filly Luna, it's pointed that she is not much older that the crusaders, but if it's mainly in third point of view with the knowledge of Naruto, he still don't know the Crusaders.
Sorry to point the fails, but like this you can correct them.
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This is definitely post crusaders.
No Eris.
And I will be focusing on fixing the errors soon.
Geez, Luna can be such a tease. I feel Naruto’s pain; the poor guy must have the worst case of blue balls ever, although I guess after this chapter that isn’t much of a problem anymore. I loved your take on Love though. Most stories I read either have romances that build over time or ones that come out of the blue. But you, your description of how love being born is probably one of the best ones I’ve read to this day. Nicely done man.
How dare you delete!