After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Awesome looking forward to what happens next
same her can't wait for more uploads
It's nice to see other members of Rarity family. Her aunt and cousins sound like interesting characters. Well Suri showing up is surprising and she's as subtlety snippy as ever. It's easy to tell she jealous of Rarity. Guess she didn't bring Coco with her. The gifts are pretty good but Lyra's was funny. Wow that a great gift for Rarity, now she can setup her canterlot boutique alot sooner. I'm guessing this Xerzichs completely believes what he doing is right even if it means turning on a friend. Has this Equilibrio ever heard of the saying not every thing will go as you planed?
7769958 I'll have ideas eventually.
7769390 That actually was an earlier chapter, but it was scrapped so it could be later down the timeline.
7770287 Strong hints into something for part 2 of season three.
7770634 Meh who knows. But yeah this wedding arc has been a challenge for me to write.
Nice little bit of expanding on Rarity's life pre-series here. Out of all the mare's in the show, we hardly seem to see Rarity's expanded family/friends outside of the core set. Sure, her parents are well known and written about by now but aunts, cousins and friends before Twilight's arrival are a bit nonexistent. Even though their cameos were nothing more then hugs and kisses, they were well used in giving us some depth for Rarity that the show should have done given the others in the Mane 6.
Xer is not someone to be trifled with and has definitely been corrupted by his power; whatever that may be. If he can ultimately control timelines and such then Equestria is in some major danger that makes Discord's breakout look like a babies temple tantrum. I see heartbreak in the future for the Mane 6 if any of them are shoved into a different Equestria.
Ch.249 Bridal Shower and Meddling! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
Looks Like Rarity is getting her second Shop sooner than she thought, Good for her.
Using "after all" at the end of the Last and Second to Last sentence doesn't sound Right to me. I would suggest either change the Later one to "at all", or better yet, get rid of the "after all" in the Second to Last(after Taratarus) sentence all together.