After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Lovely chapter. The date was pretty cute, especially with how Twilight is getting flustered and how she's learning shogi from Naruto.
As much I like how this story is going, the main problem is with Naruto...and his harem. I can't tell you the reasons because it's a fanfiction, freedom of speech and all that.
I can tell you one thing that irks me though:
HE'S SO OUT OF CHARACTER.
Well , that's what I think.
Anyway, despite my rambling, I'll keep reading until the end. Good luck.
Cute
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Out of Character? You haven't read the blog or been paying attention have you? Because people stay developmentally a teenager after living for decades. That makes ton of sense.
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True but in Naruto, his skills and abilities approved after several years but his personality stayed the same. Predicting how he or anyone else is in the future is hard. That's what the writer's job is about. He has to see what his OC's or others' life is going to be and try to put that into words so others can enjoy reading.
And sorry but no, I don't read your blogs because, to be blunt, I'm interested in your STORY, not the author him/herself. If I ever interested in what the author do, then I'll follow him/her.
I'll read your blogs. I just expressing my honest but harsh opinion. I like reading Naruto. That series was the first few ones I read since I was a child and loved how it played out until the end. To see him play out in your story with the whole relationship circle and other things, I find myself... critical about it.
But, I'm a reader. I like stories. I read stories. I give my thoughts about that story. Then put in my mind where hundreds of books are stored and put away for some time. Worlds that are created from the minds of men (and women) are worth to see because it shows how society is today, visualizing our desires and peeves on what we want or how we see in our perspective. Don't make me stop you. Continue on until the conclusion is painted on like a mural, a painting that everyone can see the ending. So enough me rambling. You got a life to finish... as in the main character's life.
Sinister developments and cuddly moments. Seems pretty balanced to me, great chapter.
Another date chapter with Twilight. There is just something about these two characters together that I always enjoy reading about. Even small scenese like the Shoji match is fun to read about and the snuggling together at the end of the chapter that is just adorable it might give me a heart attack. I’m still curious though exactly what Midnight’s plan is. Guess I’ll just have to wait and see later on when it comes to fruition.
Nice pic. to go with a nice chapter.
I'm getting a bad feeling about that group...