After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Wow. Gold Dust is such a prick. Even though this chappy had a nice ending to it it still kinda bumed me out. Then again it could have been my day in general.
You know, I really should have been in bed a few hours ago... Ah well, Onward to PONIES!!!
This pleases me, do go on! This seems to be getting good.
I like how the memories of the mares don't fall in a somewhat predictable fashion.
With Rarity it was Naruto willing to die to protect her
With Applejack it was practicality and his caring attitude.
With Pinkie it was his acceptance of who she was and also of her past without judging.
I can see how they find him attractive.
If you had placed the mare's feelings all into one chapter, that would make one heck of a read
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Maybe a special edition version of the story. XD. But yeah, a step above of so many other harem stories. It just feels like so many of them use the same reason or reused events for each of the girls.
See! These are the type of chapters that I love to read! Ones that take a character we know so well and give them something more that let’s us delve deeper into their character. Pinkie is usually the hyper and fun mare, so seeing her in this kind of state, showing us that she can be hurt emotionally and physically by words we say shows us that the character we normally see on TV can be much deeper then we can ever hope to see and those are the moments I love to read about.
How did no one else notice this?
Great bit of backstory to Pinkie affirming her feelings towards Naruto. I really enjoyed the beginning here with Pinkie dragging Naruto about on a restocking run for her party stores. That in itself could probably have an episodes worth of zany adventures if the show's writers gave it some thought. Pinkie's fears were very much unfounded here and I'm happy to see Cup Cake take up the mother role for her best employee; always enjoyed that dynamic in fics.
Gold Dust really does come off as a prick here and I'm glad too see Naruto put the ass in his place. Kinda shocked at how such things seem to happen a lot in public around Ponyville and no one step in to help. Just an observation but it also tends to happen in the show way more then any fanfic. Overall though this was a sweet bit between the Pink Party Pony and her ninja boyfriend and gave a great reason for Pinkie latching her affections onto Naruto in the story.
Serves the bastard right! If I'd been there, I would've done more than punch him...
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Yeah, Naruto is way to fast for the average Unicorn.