After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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He was never around for any of their moments nor do Naruto or Rarity know Spike all that well or have a strong friendship with them considering this is only about a little over a month since the sun summer festival,
It feels likes its been a while, I Know, but the passage of time has been rather sort.
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Wow, really? I guess your taking your time based on that Princess Twilight Episode where Celestia said it had been one year since the Pilot episode sunset celebration in season 4 huh?
Great chapter, man.
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Something like that.
Spike.. I know how it feels bro.. *sighs*
This episode has one of my favorite Rarity moments in it of all time (Rarity whining,” so getting to see it in chapter form really made me happy you kept it in there. For most of this chapter, it followed the episode down pretty well but the added fight scene was really good (I’m hoping to see more of this later down the line.) I’m kinda hoping to see the Diamond Dogs again down the line but I think the beginning was my favorite from this chapter. I’m hoping Twilight eventually does join the herd though, she’s been one of my favorites for a long time.
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Nah, the whole only one year thing is too constraining, I think they screwed up with that, so I'm doing my own timeline.
Man, was Twilight in her own little world here or what? Must have been a huge shock to find out five of your friends were suddenly part of a herd. There must have been an epic bit of research going on to not hear about Naruto's herd or Twilight just doesn't bother with the rumor mill in Ponyville. Either way this was a nice way for an info dump towards the one mare that has been somewhat absent lately in the fic.
The way the lighthearted tone in the beginning of this chapter sudden takes a nose dive into panic was very well done. The fact that the group didn't attempt to make a mad scramble in finding Rarity was a surprise that turned out to be a good thing. If they hadn't had their heads about them, I fear we'd have a massacre on our hands once they found where Rarity was before she could annoy/torture her kidnappers.
I'd say I feel sorry for the diamond dogs but they seriously had it coming kidnapping the one mare who could complain about anything given the chance. This was probably a fate worst then a beating from Naruto in a way seeing as they wouldn't have to hear the complaints in the first place. Would definitely like to see a comedic cameo of the diamond dog trio if it could possibly happen.