After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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OOOOOOOO boy. The towns folk are gonna hang this on them for a while.
This was probably my favorite change up of an episode yet. The original canon version was a nice change of pace that included some nice sentiments revolving around Spike and co but this version really stands out. Spike's birthday and his interactions with his friends was written spot on and didn't seem stilted dialogue wise. The best part of the chapter was the tone you took of Spike's growth and the reactions of the townspeople were a definite plus as those two factors were my main nitpick of the canon episode.
I've always thought that the way that Spike was automatically given the green light to live in Ponyville was a bit to tame given this is the same town that freaked out over a fellow equine solely for the fact that she was a Zebra. This just made the blatant ignoring of a dragon within their small town all the more annoying too me. If a Zebra can cause mass hysteria then shouldn't a dragon do the same since they are rarely seen outside of maybe Canterlot? This brings up the fact that after Spike's episode of greed growth everything went back too normal like there wasn't a gigantic dragon wrecking the town and generally being a terrifying menace to a peaceful community. I say this because whenever one the Mane 6 goes off the and cause a bit of trouble around town they at least get some sort of scolding whether from their friends or the general public.
In this chapter though we see that the probationary period is over and the ponies of Ponyville won't be forgetting this disaster anytime soon. I can understand their emotions since it seems that the town just can't get a break without some form of disaster befalling them as the home to the Elements, but seeing what they believed to be a harmless young dragon grow into a beast running off instinct can certainly change that mind set. This should bring some interesting conflicts in the future and I can definitely see some foreshadowing in a possible change up too the origins of Spike's reasoning to join the Great Dragon Migration in Dragon Quest.
Anyway, I figure I've blathered on long enough here for this chapter and I can't wait too see what else you've cooked up.
OK, if it wasn't obvious before it is now... you're a Yu-Gi-Oh! fan.
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Now who are you going to give hermos to?