After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Awesome looking forward to your next update
Clever operation name.
7490821 same here can't wait for the next update of this story
Operation Sunstorm, oh no!!!!!. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ?
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Whats Operation Sunstorm again Captain??
Leave it to Naruto to be curious about the Crystal empires libraries second to Twilight of couse. Probably one of the only times times Naruto and Shining Armor have had any guy time. A nice brotherly moment between them. Naruto improving Twilight's house and making it feel like a real home was a great way to show she is a valued member of their forming family. This is a great look into Cadance's character since she appears only few time in season 3 of the show: in the season opening and the season finale. How things were going in the empire since she and Shining took over would had been a good episode in my opinion and how the Crystal ponies were adjusting to the changes. By the way two questions: can Naruto still channel all his power into a single part of his body just like how he beat toneri and when does operation sunstorm start
Lots of conversations going on this time around and with it some extra characterization for some our royals. Really dug Naruto and Shining's conversation about relationships in general while also breaching into Twilight's growth from when she was a filly in her brother's eyes to who she is now. The series kind of skirts the line in showing more of big bro Shining Armor when he's around Twi and any hint of it is appreciated.
Cadence and Tia's conversation on the other hand gave us a nice bit insight on the Princess of Love and I got to say I'm glad you didn't take the easy way out and make Cady into a complete love obsessed mare. I understand why some authors do so for comedic moments but the trend gets grating after a while. Your take on the Pink Princess certainly is preferred and make her way more believable as a character. It's just nice to know she still worries like an actual ruler should instead of seeming like the perfect ruler.
Overall this was a fun and informative chapter.
Ch.237 Important Talks in the Crystal Empire! - Corrections/Add-Ons/Ins are Underlined and in Bold.
While Data is good here, I think Dating seems just a little bit Better.
And to think, Naruto's little gesture of fixing up the Library will be a waste Once Tirik blows the place up in a few Seasons.