After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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6207094 thanks for the info.. On a side note i saw none of that yet
I think rare should be mare other then that this is awesome
Never liked this episode compared to the others of the series but I believe you did a great job at adding some more drama too the stage. I do think Naruto was a bit too quick in fully forgiving Rares. I wouldn't want them too separate for a period of time because that is way too overused here as a way to "fix" relationships. Most of my worries are probably unfounded but I do feel that Rarity still has some unresolved issues she needs to vent but is too selfless to hurt the others feelings. Yes, she is the alpha but I still feel that she has yet to fully embrace being the alpha due to her generous nature.
Hopefully once the herd is officially finalized they can air out some of their problems because its obvious that there are some hang ups between the girls. This story has shown that the interplay between the herd has been very dynamic so far and that there are hints of future head-butting between some of the girls due to there very alpha attitudes down the line and I can't wait to see if you give us some type of inter-herd conflict.
Love the ending.
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I'm curious. What do you mean when you say heads would be butting within the herd?? Who did you see having issues with each other and why?
Pride always comes before a fall...
Well this was a funny start to that episode, and looks like Twilight is becoming even more comfortable with being in a relationship with Naruto. It was nice of everyone to come to Cloudsdale to help cheer Rainbow Dash on especially since she needed it with her being completely nervous about the competition but Naruto and the rest are doing what they can to keep her spirits up. Rarity's new wings completely went to her head and her and Naruto having a fight seem like nice bit of drama. As sad as it seem it makes sense that some would take advantage of a competition like this. That was a close call for Rarity but Rainbow pulled through for her and pull off the sonic rainboom. Great introduction of the wonderbolts, can't wait to see more of them. It good that Naruto and Rarity reconciled with each other, some times couples fight but if they really love each other then they can talk about it and work things out.