After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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It's taken me 3 days but I've finally read all that's been posted so far. I can't wait for more.
Nothing much to say here seeing as this was an outline chapter for bigger and better things. Really liked the fact that Naruto is parenting the right way by bribing his way through agreements! It's the fastest and easiest way to do so given that Naruto has had little time to breath outside of his duty.
Hope to see how Gryff's character is portrayed soon. Thinking about it now, Naruto really doesn't seem to have many guy friends to hang out with and Gryff sounds like a great way for some character interactions if he doesn't end up as a douchebag like Gilda. Naruto definitely needs another male friend to hang now given that Spike is still out of commission.
I read it all. I read it bloody all. A story that rips into you with the feels, the love, the emotion. This is the second time I've read everything that's on fanfiction. So now I can give a proper review. The build up throughout the story is wonderful. The character development from chapter to chapter is just beyond divine. You don't make Naruto overpowered and you give each of the mane six their own spotlight whether it be in a chapter of spending time with Naruto, who I understand is the main protagonist but still, or spending time with the herd.
You also made Ditzy more than the esteemed derpy hooves that loves muffins many stick with, you built up the herd with real cause instead of us just having them fall for naruto out of the blue for the sake of a harem. No instead of that you made it a believable romance with each one where each girl gets her own spotlight time with naruto even if Rarity is the first and foremost character because of her history with him. You tied in the nightmare's very effectively, and you set up your villains to have a confrontation with the bearers while showing how they were weaker before because they weren't manifesting the true potential of their own elements of discord.
All that together with the simple fact you made believable OCs, believable backgrounds, and an awesome history of Equestria, shows a well thought out, developed, story that I will definitely read over and over again when bored. All because you have definitely shown that crossovers are not always what we expect. You've also made me decide to take a hand at writing mlp fanfiction again, albeit differently than my last attempt. So thank you for the inspiration, Thank you for the beautiful read, and Thank you for producing this amazing story.
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Like what? I can't remember anything from the chapter that isn't generic or such.
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The core of correct term for the scope of the fics is Theastral. Negasi is the common/slang term among the popolous that doesn't know them or interact with them. Luna and Celestia use Theastral as well as anyone else who treats them without discrimination.
That was just one of the things I was exploring in the fic and hope people will read all of the content there instead of just jumping to conclusions before finishing the content.