After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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this is pretty good ^_^ i can see how it's different though i like it ^_^
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Exactly that's why I like to do rewriters.
Awesome chapter. I like the rewrite version of RD's first appearance.
I do remember the flashback being in the original version of this story that I read before and it's nice to see that it still made it's way into this remake. Why do I get the feeling though that the teasing in this story between Naruto and Rainbow Dash is just going to keep going up and up until we get past the point of no return XD Still though, it's nice to see the interactions between those two. Most people say that opposites attract, but I find that sometimes the same could be said for people exactly alike, maybe that's what grabs my attention between these two.
Stick with Bro, Naruto. 'Sis' is just wrong
Considering his wind natured chakra, he should have some affinity to Rainbow.
Very nice introduction to Rainbow Dash. I've always enjoyed her as someone who likes to tease her friends when an awkward situation pops up. It suits her personality to a T. The flashback was very nicely written and was evenly paced without it being to abrupt of a shift in tone from action to recovery. Everything flowed well between Dash's rescue attempt all the way to Redheart's brief cameo and interaction with Dash and Naruto.
Also is it just me or does Redheart seem to be unintentionally striking a JoJo pose in that drawing?
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I think my only issue with this gag between the two of them is I had Rainbow on that out of focus status in the first part of the story after the summer sun incident so it wasn't used as much as it could have been.
Well Twilight really doesn't have a very high opinion of friends, but where she's coming from its understandable. Rainbow teasing Naruto like makes sense since his responds is so funny.It seem like Naruto meets most of the girls almost half dead. Great way to introduce Nurse Redheart. And next up is the first mare who stole his heart.