After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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This chapter was very sweet.
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Indeed, she's going to be a main characters.
5282559 why to go with zoidiac names Leo and Aquarius
5283891 Because those are constellation names. Going to build up upon that as the story goes on.
This chapter started up the Naruto x Luna realtionship and if I could use one word for it, it would be...adorable. I'm a big fan of the pairing in the original version and it's nice to see that it still does good here in the remake. Luna really does need a friend, being gone for a thousand years has probably closed her up from other and who better to open her up then Naruto. Although I do hope that this leads to sweeter things between the two (big fan of Naruto x Luna)
You know one of the biggest things that bug me about the show is just how the Mane 6 are treated by the general populace. I can understand that settlements that are outside of major cities such as Manehatten or Canterlot could find it hard to hear about the Bearers, but the show basically makes it out like no one really cares that these six mares are basically the only pieces of national security they have. Without them, Equestria would probably be conquered by one of the series' villains because as the writers have shown, the royal guard is basically worthless when danger comes calling.
Sure, you could argue that if they were celebrities then the meaning of the show would be lost, but c'mon writers, most of your characters treat the girls with little or no respect that they deserve; case in point the Wonderbolts. If this show had any realism to it then Dash would already be a Wonderbolt and not just seen as an annoying fan that Spitfire tried her damnedest to manipulate during the Equestrian Games. How do you do that to someone who has saved you a dozen or so times while you're too busy getting in the way during a disaster?
At least here we actually have a realistic reaction too suddenly having a group of national heroes in your small town. Everyone's reactions too suddenly being famous was as in character as it could be. Each mare basically reacted as their personality dictates: Dash with elation at being the center of attention, Rarity with money signs in her eyes, Pinkie happy too have more friends, AJ's annoyance yet grudgingly content that business may pick up, and Flutter's with absolute panic that she is the center of attention.
Finally, the first official meeting with Luna outside of danger was just as diabetes inducing sweet as I thought it would be. Kind of sad that the writers didn't take advantage of an absolute gold mine of views if they would have went with a Luna chapter earlier in the show. Luna's adjustment to being gone for a 1,000 years was a major missed opportunity and you capitalize on it here. Luna definitely needs someone to help outside of Tia and Naruto is the best to help her. I mean c'mon, the guy was suddenly an anthropomorphic equine when he showed up in Equestria. The culture shock probably equates to being gone for 1,000 years.
Aren't consort and mate the same thing?
6378974 At first glance, yes. The difference is that a consort is a spouse through political marriage, rather than marriage through love.
6378974 pretty sure mate is more like a wife or a single lover. Consorts are their for the seed and fucking
well then that was blunt.6603110
I hope you don't mind me pointing out errors.
7837307 Nah this is actually useful.
Fluttershy would probably prefer dealing with actual Vultures.