After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
Page generated in 0.056 seconds
Total duration
1,077 users online
1,348,990 hits today, 2,439,861 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Loved this chapter even if it was a bit rough in spots. Hot Streak has been my favorite OC in the fic so far and the reveal of her back story was a great way to conclude her hatred on her mother and younger sister. The battle with Dash was short and to the point but considering both are speedsters who don't rely on brute strength or long range combat it was appropriate how it ended.
The reunion was nice if a bit sudden with Stormy and Spitfire's arrival but its easily overlooked once the memory is brought up. Kidnapped at an event where your distant mother only seems to rescue your baby sibling must have twisted Streak's memory of the event given her early resentment of Spitfire taking their mom's limited attention away from her eldest. Can definitely see how the Nightmare Children used that to turn Streak into her bloodthirsty if ultimate reckless self.
In the First paragraph you have written down " she found himself".
A few more paragraphs down you have written down "his hits carried little power".
Rainbow's really taken Naruto's and Stormy Flare's lessons to heart in fighting smarter. She had a little trouble at first but using what she knew about Streak's temper and her improved skills she manage to win. She's really come a long way from how she was back then. And she's even faster now if that was possible. I'm guessing Rain turned into Super Rainbow Dash A lot of disturbing similarities between Rain and Streak, good thing she grew and matured. Finally we get to see the backstory for Hot Streak or Comet since her introduction, she been one of the most interesting members of the Nightmare Children. It's sad since she was a sweet child who loved her little sister and just wanted to spend some time with her mother who was a little busy with fans. Wild guess the kidnapper was Partisan Shade to recruit a strong flyer for their forces. Stormy and Spitfire showing up to show that they did love and miss her and wanted her back was heartwarming and it's sad to think that the children used her misunderstanding of a memory to quite literally curse her with hatred for her own family but thanks to Rainbow their back together and they can start to heal.