After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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I really love Shy's reactions when she talked about her body in front of Naruto. Once again, I also found her background impressive.
Should be leave.
This should be mind.
Great job making Shy act so cute. I think I may develop...
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5447153 don't joke about that. I have that and it ruined my life.
Fluttershy is just so adorable! If any mare would be embarrassed the most by these questions, it would be her. I do like how you keep dividing the three tribes up even further, even if it is just by the smallest details like weight and height instead of one of them just having wings, one of them having a horn and one of them…being stronger I guess (never really did know what Earth Ponies had that was different from Unicorns and Pegasus’s besides being stronger) I’m surprised you moved Fluttershy’s cutie mark from her hip, but I guess not everyones mark doesn’t have to be on their hips.
Hmm...why does her fainting sound so familiar...
N-Naruto-kun!? *faints*
Hinata!?
Meh, it'll come to me eventually.
5584982 its simple fluttershy in this is like hinata only with a could differences like fluttershy is a skilled veterinarian
Surprisingly I found that I enjoyed Naruto and Twilight's interactions too be the most enjoyable part of this chapter. I think that this chapter actually shows the progression between the two as actual friends with similar interests and not as say master to student when a friendship problem rears its head. The ease of how their conversation flowed is very much a dramatic change up from say the Nightmare Moon arc where Twilight's talk's seemed a little stilted compared to when she spoke to the rest of the girls. Even if it said interaction was briefly at the beginning it spoke at how at ease the two have become with one another and that something.
Anyway, all I can say is that Naruto really is blind when it comes to some of the girls early attractions to him. Poor Fluttershy, having the stallion you're pining for just up and ask you the big three must have been system overload for Fluttershy.Exe. Nice detail in giving her a Doctorate, that clears up why no one questions her care taking of animals; which when you thing about it, kind of make sense rather then just doing it for a hobby and not having legit knowledge. Lastly, I found the bit about interbreeding to be a nice insight into Equestrian culture that most, outside of political-focused fics, tend to ignore even thought the show kind of drops it with the Cake twins birth.
*SPIT TAKES across to the nearest comment* F CUP!? O_O
given the times of these comments, I'm not surprised that you didn't know that it was revealed in the show that Fluttershy has a brother. who is a slob and moocher.
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