After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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Alright! New chapter
when will you add the other oc
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Give it time. I'm getting to that point, I'm not going to wreck the pace of my story just to add a bunch of OCs randomly,
5783842 good point I'll be patient
5783842 for now
I feel sorry for spike to have his be broken by Rarity.
Really interested in the Nightmare Night chapter now. Can't wait to see how Naruto changes things up.
5785012 better then leading him on I say
Not really one for harems or in this case marems, but this has been over all an interesting story. I will continue to follw it and see where it leads, and if it falls into the same traps as other harem stories.
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What other traps?
5815949 One while the romance is important but with large harems they tend to focus to much on it at the cost of any other story. Taking so much time to focus on the characters in the harem that nothing else really goes on. Second is sex, I saw the sex tag and hope, that unlike a lot of other harem writers that does not become the main focus of your story.
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Yeah I was trying to do a build up with a strict timeline and as for the sexual content I was trying to really build up the bonds of the characters instead of just jumping into it.
So Nightmare Moon isn’t actually gone for good? I’m guessing that the Elements didn’t exactly work 100% then. Maybe ‘Nightmare Night’ will be able to help her socialize more like it did in the show. I’m also glad that Rarity finally broke the news to Spike about her already being in a relationship then letting it drag on for a while. You also basically went over every argument Spike and Rarity would have about this subject in one chapter and I got to admire that. And I see your having Sweetie Belle being Spike’s new romance for later on….kinda hoping Spike gets a herd too down the line, that would be interesting to see.
Hm, I'd give Luna's prank a 7/10 for overall effect. It was a nice attempt but she could definitely take some pointers from the troll of troll's Celestia in how to get under Naruto's skin a bit more effectively. Overall this chapter's two main focuses were very well done in execution in that we finally got the pesky Spike crushing over Rarity plotline out of the way while also showing that things aren't as peachy in Equestria as we first assumed. Thinking about it now, Nightmare's little show of returning to Luna probably bit it in the ass due to the early prep of Naruto and company knowing that Nightmare wasn't gone as they first assumed. Certainly pushed them into hunting the Nightmare Forces down sooner then what you would thing they would do.
Considering what he thought was going to happen before she interrupted him, I can imagine him saying this like Alucard did in the abridged series.
Miss JR Smile helper, well it seems we have lots of laughter to spread.
Picture at the end of the chapter is down.