After being attacked by a Nightmare creature Naruto awakens to find himself in the magical nation of Equestria. Making the best of his situation he befriends its citizens and make a new life there unaware of the role he will play in its future.
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gah that last line got me right in the feels
BAAAAAAAAANG HEART SHOT
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There will be a definite friendship and bond.
6418875 Yes the feels indeed.
First off the beginning of this chapter should hit home to anyone doubting the main pairing. It's obvious that the two truly do love each other to the point that they are on the same wave length when it comes to how they wish for their wedding to be. This little intro with the wedding planner was a fun way too start the chapter that I've been waiting to read. The fact that Rarity also included Trixie in the dress shopping was also a surprise seeing as she has yet to see herself on friendly terms with the full herd. Hopefully this will help Trixie build confidence so that she doesn't have to put up a front when around others she isn't on friendly terms with.
Rarity's nightmare sequence was even better then the first and shows that Shadowfright's machinations are progressing at a worrying rate. It seems that Naruto may be thinking that these night terrors started out as pre-wedding jitters but are in fact much more dire. Things are about to take a dark turn here and I fear that some of the future actions will be leaving scars that won't be easily forgotten across Equestria.
I felt that the two scenes featuring Dinky and Naruto were quite heartwarming. While Ditzy has done a fantastic job in raising her, dinky does need that father figure in her life and Naruto fits the bill. On the other side of the spectrum, we see that Amethyst is comfortable enough to share her concerns with Naruto and allow him to take the lead in solving Ditzy's issue. Seeing how defensive Ame was in the beginning of this fic to now certainly shows that the two's relationship has grown from the rocky start; embarrassing moments not withstanding.
Finally we get to the meat of this chapter-Ditzy's doubts that she's leagues below her herd sisters in terms of ability, looks, and smarts. Compared to the others, Ditzy does look out of place by an outsiders point of view. Compared to Naruto and the rest she definitely must face some scrutiny for how she is in the herd composed of heros/royalty. This chapter needed to happen so that such doubts could be rectified before those personal doubts cold fester. Naruto does love Ditzy but Rarity was the first too open his heart after the pain of loss Naruto had been burdened with for ages. If he hadn't have became so close to Rairty he would liable have ended up with somepony else as his alpha; possibly even Ditzy. Too me Naruto does need someone who isn't as gung ho as he so that he can stay grounded. Sure, the others can and will defend themselves and their country to their dying breath but Ditzy has two very important pony's keeping her from going off to battle alongside the rest of the herd. Give the others a couple of more years and they will probably fall into that mindset as well once the herd grows with their own bundles of joy.
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Naruto and Rarity are so in love that they can finish each others sentences. This Mary Splash sounds like a interesting oc. It's good that Rarity included Trixie in the herd picking out their bridesmaids dresses, since if she going to be a part of the family she's going to have to get use to the others, of course Rainbow and Applejack might've had a little problem with it at first but Rarity showed why she's the Alpha mare. Great the Nightmares are getting worse, hopefully Princess Luna can help but they won't make it easy. Good that Dinky is getting use to Naruto as a father figure and Amethyst is feeling better with him around and can talk to him more. Ditzy feeling out of place in the herd makes sense since with the others and Luna she would probably like she couldn't compare to them and feels normal but thats exactly what Naruto loves about her. It's good he put her fears to rest and assured her that she's special to him. Looks like they had fun and the last part was very heartwarming.
Hnnng...... thats so fuckin precious......